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Chapter 14 – Cleanup IIIApr 19, 2023
Chapter 13 – Cleanup IIMar 31, 2023
Chapter 12 – Cleanup IMar 24, 2023
Chapter 11 – Grime IVMar 20, 2023
Chapter 10 – Grime IIIMar 18, 2023
Chapter 9 – Grime IIMar 15, 2023
Chapter 8 – Grime IMar 12, 2023
Chapter 7 – Determination VIIMar 10, 2023
Chapter 6 – Determination VIMar 9, 2023
Chapter 5 – Determination VMar 9, 2023
Chapter 4 – Determination IVMar 7, 2023
Chapter 3 – Determination IIIMar 6, 2023
Chapter 2 – Determination IIMar 6, 2023
Chapter 1 – Determination IMar 6, 2023
PrologueMar 6, 2023

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tochi

Status: Epilogue I

Apr 26, 2022

I was compelled enough to make an account so I could review this.

It's an early review and I plan to update it as more chapters come out.

The beginning really had me hooked right away. This is turning out to be one of the better novels on this site. The quality of the writing so far is pretty good, I didn't encounter any grammar mistakes.

I'm used to reading novels with male MCs, so the focus on a female perspective is a welcome change, though from what I can see from the tags, we might follow multiple MCs.

I'll make it short with a pros and cons list:

+ smut that doesn't feel forced or mindless

+ high quality writing

+ unpredictable plot

+/- so far there's more plot than smut, which I personally prefer so I'm fine with it as long as it's more meaningful

- I'm used to a faster pace but this is only a personal preference, it's not slow but not fast either

If you're looking for a semi-serious novel with good smut and plot, then this fulfills the job.

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Eugenio

Status: prologue

Nov 29, 2022

It's quite confusionary. More than an "unpredictable plot" it just jump from a place to another without a rime or sense. The smut is not that good. Several choices made by the characters are questionable, although we don't know much about them since as the summary states this is a story that start from the half.

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