"Is that Goku?"
"Looks like I can successfully transform my power into Goku and also summon him. Awesome!"
"Oh, I can also summon and copy the power of Naruto and Luffy too. Damn boy!"
"Shit it's hard to control the power of the one-punch man!"
"You are already in my genjutsu."
"Detroit Smash!!!!"
"I am the heavenly red dragon emperor."
"All according to my plan."
"Wake up to reality."
"Ban------kai!"
"This world shall know pain."
"You can call me, King of the Pirates."
There are several problems with the grammar, phrases that do not end and others things that break the immersion.
I have no idea if the trama is good.
the combats too have problems, for example in the first one he said that a man touched with two finger the other and flew him away, then he said that it was a kick. Completely break the immersion.
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