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EpilogueDec 6, 2023
Chapter 63: A Different Kind of RebellionDec 6, 2023
Chapter 62: Rebellion, Part FifteenDec 6, 2023
Chapter 61: Rebellion, Part FourteenDec 6, 2023
Chapter 60: Rebellion, Part ThirteenDec 6, 2023
Chapter 59: Rebellion, Part TwelveDec 6, 2023
Chapter 58: Rebellion, Part ElevenOct 12, 2023
Chapter 57: Rebellion, Part TenSep 30, 2023
Chapter 56: Rebellion, Part NineSep 25, 2023
Chapter 55: Rebellion, Part EightSep 13, 2023
Chapter 54: Rebellion, Part SevenSep 1, 2023
Chapter 53: Rebellion, Part SixAug 25, 2023
Chapter 52: Rebellion, Part FiveAug 13, 2023
Chapter 51: Rebellion, Part FourAug 2, 2023
Chapter 50: Rebellion, Part ThreeJul 18, 2023

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Glenn-Glass

Status: chapter 38: diosia, part seven

Apr 17, 2023

Prepare to Suspend Disbelief

If you're looking for a "no thoughts; head empty" read, then look no further. But if you're in the mood to critically think about the content you're consuming (even a little bit), then you might be signing up for a bit of a headache with this story. Many things in this story crumble under the lightest of questioning.

I think the most positive single quality I can point out about this story is its delivery of sappy dialog between lovers once the first love interest is introduced. If that's your jam, then I recall some particularly cheesy one-liners for you to enjoy.

Some of the noted inconsistencies / irksome parts:

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Goddess recruits MC due to her extremely high libido. MC rejects all advances
MC has zero personality change after living 18 years in the new world. She has made zero mental progress despite doubling her mind's age. The story really reads as "if it didn't happen in writing, then it didn't happen at all". There are multi-year time skips in the beginning but it's as if a single day has gone by for each one when it comes to anything but the MC's age.
MC is trained by warrior mother. Upon first fight with antagonists, is taken complete surprise by all her own physical capabilities, including running faster than the speed of sound.
MC has made zero friends yet is constantly lusted after and she kept her previous life's memories about being lonely to motivate herself to not have this happen again.
MC, completely unprompted, reveals hiding place of her family to antagonist
MC's village is the embodiment of "we've tried nothing and we're all out of ideas" when it comes to dealing with the antagonists. They've known about the problem for years and do little to nothing to prepare.
A race of completely martial people have never developed grappling.

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