The novel would be way better if the author fixed a few things.
Especially the writing.
The dialogue is often not separated properly. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes. The author sometimes even forgot to add ellipses at the end of sentences. Here is an example from the start of chapter 8:
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“What... What are you talking about... ” “we never bully kids from school... ” “you do not have any proof... ” “if you do not want to go out with us just say so” “Don’t slander us!” Everyone answered at the same time.
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The dialogue is a bit unrealistic, and so is the situation. Even if they were part of the plan, I doubt they would have been openly informed about it. Seeing as they're like 10-13 years old, they could expose themselves. Each character's speech should have started with a capital letter, and every sentence should have been written in a new row.
The author often writes things as if he made them up on the spot. He also dumps way too much information onto the readers.
It's a good, lighthearted story that has the reader see the MC from his unstable and unhappy situation to a much better place with lovely side characters and entertaining (for the most part) villains. If you've the time then I reccomend giving this a try.
Pretty unique reincarnation novel with a cultivation theme to it. I've only just started but the writing style has me hooked. I like the short chapters with mini cliff hangers, it makes me want to read more and more haha. I have not fully dove deep into the cultivation process just yet, but it seems like there will be a standard school setting. Plus rapid growth of the MC getting stronger with a unique cultivation technique. I'm happy I found this story, very cool world this author is creating:)
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The novel would be way better if the author fixed a few things.
Especially the writing.
The dialogue is often not separated properly. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes. The author sometimes even forgot to add ellipses at the end of sentences. Here is an example from the start of chapter 8:
"
“What... What are you talking about... ” “we never bully kids from school... ” “you do not have any proof... ” “if you do not want to go out with us just say so” “Don’t slander us!” Everyone answered at the same time.
"
The dialogue is a bit unrealistic, and so is the situation. Even if they were part of the plan, I doubt they would have been openly informed about it. Seeing as they're like 10-13 years old, they could expose themselves. Each character's speech should have started with a capital letter, and every sentence should have been written in a new row.
The author often writes things as if he made them up on the spot. He also dumps way too much information onto the readers.
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It's a good, lighthearted story that has the reader see the MC from his unstable and unhappy situation to a much better place with lovely side characters and entertaining (for the most part) villains. If you've the time then I reccomend giving this a try.
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Pretty unique reincarnation novel with a cultivation theme to it. I've only just started but the writing style has me hooked. I like the short chapters with mini cliff hangers, it makes me want to read more and more haha. I have not fully dove deep into the cultivation process just yet, but it seems like there will be a standard school setting. Plus rapid growth of the MC getting stronger with a unique cultivation technique. I'm happy I found this story, very cool world this author is creating:)
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