First and foremost, hats off to author for writing a novel. I know, I have tried and dropped it few chapters in. Now coming to review...
I like the idea of the story but the execution leaves much to desire. The first few chapters are full of grammatical and well as literal mistakes. Even author has accepted that, but apparently dropped revising them due to a poll (?). @Author please do revise it. They act as gateway to your story. This is the fourth time I started reading your story and the first time I read it completely.
Second is the constant POV switches, time jumps (?). It's like author knows what he wants to show but is not able to do so. Just having a line to split the views would make reading much easier. Especially the last few chapters are extremely chaotic. What's is happening, why it is happening, when it is happening... everything is up for question. Author might want to maintain the confusion, but this is chaos not planned confusion or hidden hints. His personality takes a uturn and author simply explains it in one line..."memeory fragments."
In the end, the story is more close to crack fic (I personally think it's a crack fic...) rather than a cultivation novel. Thats why being sort of lenient in rating....3/5.
It entertains. Good idea. Poor execution. Shabby grammar.
I'll start off by saying that the grammar is good, any errors that do exist are minimal and didn't break my focus when reading.
This novel fits tropes within tropes and then some, it's a wonderful parody of Xianxia pulling aspects from all over the shop.
Reincarnation Transmigration Regression, the holy trinity are all present, even combinations are up for grabs with our MC notably being a Reincarnated Transmigrator who's done this song and dance once before.
A little fast and light worldview but it is a promising one. It has the potential of a diamond but it depends on how the author will shape the traits of the characters, the cultivation system, karma, fate, heavenly way.
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.
I didn’t die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn’t get hit b
Alastair Carter is a 27-year-old marketing and management teacher like many others around the world. Well… maybe besides the fact that he teaches some of that world’s prodigies, but it’s just a small detail. Even though he loves
Aren’t you tired of the typical cultivation story, where an isekai’d person comes into the world and becomes a brutal or selfish person? I know I am. So instead of being fully changed by the world, I want this protagonist to stick to t
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He was a prostitute who had a simple dream. Living in peace, going to college and getting a good job like an average man of his age.
Natasha Novak was a fairly known artist from an Earth devastated by pandemics. One day, she was playing an online game and falls off her chair as a moment of luck brightens her otherwise monotonous life, and dies of a stroke due to hitting her hea
First and foremost, hats off to author for writing a novel. I know, I have tried and dropped it few chapters in. Now coming to review...
I like the idea of the story but the execution leaves much to desire. The first few chapters are full of grammatical and well as literal mistakes. Even author has accepted that, but apparently dropped revising them due to a poll (?). @Author please do revise it. They act as gateway to your story. This is the fourth time I started reading your story and the first time I read it completely.
Second is the constant POV switches, time jumps (?). It's like author knows what he wants to show but is not able to do so. Just having a line to split the views would make reading much easier. Especially the last few chapters are extremely chaotic. What's is happening, why it is happening, when it is happening... everything is up for question. Author might want to maintain the confusion, but this is chaos not planned confusion or hidden hints. His personality takes a uturn and author simply explains it in one line..."memeory fragments."
In the end, the story is more close to crack fic (I personally think it's a crack fic...) rather than a cultivation novel. Thats why being sort of lenient in rating....3/5.
It entertains. Good idea. Poor execution. Shabby grammar.
Oh and before I forget. Great art!
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The MC is hilarious. The art is 10/10. I recommend giving read till you get to first MC candidate if your debating to read.
Might add more if I ever remember something to add.
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An incredibly satisfying read.
I'll start off by saying that the grammar is good, any errors that do exist are minimal and didn't break my focus when reading.
This novel fits tropes within tropes and then some, it's a wonderful parody of Xianxia pulling aspects from all over the shop.
Reincarnation Transmigration Regression, the holy trinity are all present, even combinations are up for grabs with our MC notably being a Reincarnated Transmigrator who's done this song and dance once before.
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A little fast and light worldview but it is a promising one. It has the potential of a diamond but it depends on how the author will shape the traits of the characters, the cultivation system, karma, fate, heavenly way.
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