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Mokami Yaoyorozu, born as Momo's twin brother with advanced Quirk that allows him to create even living things. With the ability to change the structure of everything, he tries to become a hero in his second life.
But one day he sees his father's dark deeds and realizes rich people all around the globe are part of something big and dark. To protect his family and innocent, he starts to get stronger while scheme through their ranks, so he can destroy them from within.
Join Mokami in his exciting life!
What to expect;
Strong Romance; MC is romantic type of a guy that abhors to use women. There will be many women around him but he will woo them with love.
Harem(Incest); There will be many women from the anime and some OCs. Momo and their mother will also be part of the harem.
Slow Pace; It is not going to be meeting and fucking in an instant. I like to take my time and build up the romance before getting into the action so if you are looking for quick fucks, this story is not for you.
Strong but not Overpowered MC; He is always stronger than average but not omnipotent. Expect him to fallback and lose things just to rise on his feet stronger. Although the main theme is not power, the novel has some.
Some dark truths about world that may trigger you. Abuse of minors and worse. Never done by MC, will never be done MC but as MC discovers more about the Dark Organization, the nastier it will get. If you are a snowflake, I don't recommend you to read.
For now the publish schedule is a chapter on weekdays and two chapters on weekends.
- Check my new novels!Dec 8, 2023
- 249- All-Father! [Final]Sep 5, 2023
- Ch248- AftermathSep 4, 2023
- Ch247- All for One FellSep 3, 2023
- Ch246- Why?Sep 2, 2023
- Ch245- TrickedSep 1, 2023
- Ch244- MLA is HereAug 30, 2023
- Ch243- I-Island WarAug 29, 2023
- Ch242- League’s Attack!Aug 28, 2023
- Ch241- Meta Liberation ArmyAug 27, 2023
- Ch240- The New Hero Billboard Chart JPAug 26, 2023
- Ch239- League’s New TargetAug 25, 2023
- Ch238- All DeadAug 23, 2023
- Ch237- GigantoAug 22, 2023
- Ch236- Happy AccidentsAug 21, 2023
- 956 reading
- 201 plan to read
- 59 completed
- 42 paused
- 91 dropped
Despite rating it 3 stars I can say that I enjoyed reading it, I just have some issues with it.
So my main issue comes from it being a smut story. Dont get me wrong, I love smut, thats why I got here in the first place. And its nice to see deku getting no one and MC getting a harem.
But damn. For a harem smut story it just lacks smut! In 250 chapters of the story there is probably 20ish smut chapters, pretty much all of them in the first half, some are basically petting/oral. Some girls have literally 0 s*xual interactions with MC, some just get oral. The 2 of the main girls get 1 (longer) chapter each after all the buildup close to the end of the story and thats it. And then there is one that gets like 5.
Honestly, if you are making a smut harem story you gotta give more action. One chapter every 10+ chapters is nothing, especially when its spread out in the way it was - all but 3 of the scenes where in the first 150 chapters, then nothing.
It would be fine if there was 1 good scene per character and maybe 2/3 for the "main bunch". It would be fine if it was hardcore smut like some other stories, where there is a smut chapter every 2-4 normal ones. It would even be fine if it wasnt a smut story and just went full PG and faded to black. But the way it is it is just a half baked smut-less smut harem, where some of the fgrls dont even get any spotlight, and I just hate it.
Now that I vented and the internet knows about my smut addiction, a bit about the main story. Honestly, I enjoyed it. Yeah, the last third or so of the story is rushed like crazy, and it brings down overall enjoyment, but it brought me so my joy seeing Deku being a glorified lookout in his own story.
Besides my dislike for the MC of the original manga, the story overall is pretty nice, dosent have a lot of plot holes (outside of everyone being fine with 4 year old being as smart as an adult), and is nicely completed.
So if you want to read a decent BnHA fanfic with a bit of harem and skipable smut sprinkled in - go for it. If you want to read a good smut harem in BnHA universe - probably skip this one, scenes are too sparse and a lot of the girls that you really want to get some action get little or non at all.
P.S. If anyone know some good smut with no ntr and okish story from BnHA - hit me up
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Its kinda good though there are somethings that I find weird and not really sure about
1. Why use a hero name All-Father. Such a weird name to be called about. Still dont get it why use creati hero instead of creation hero. I know momo says something like because he is her hero or something but still dont get it.
2. Weird use of -chan. I know as kids its okay but he is like a little older now. Even if you're family just weird.
3. At the early part of the chapters 18+ scene chapters are too much, not saying that its bad but had to skip them. Cause having it too much make it boring in the later chapter
4. His interaction with the members of the harem is weird, Im okay with harem but there is something weird that I cant explain. Maybe its kinda forced or something
Well in the its kinda good (?) For me. Just have problem with that
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The story and the script are so captivating that you can't stop reading, I'm really enjoying this work a lot and I can't wait to read more. Honestly it's one of the most captivating I've read so far and it's only 49 cap so far
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Honestly, a nice change to other MHA fanfics. I hope the MC becomes more op or finds out other ways to use and improve his powers, testing his limits.
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Story is good.
Cons: MC sometimes dun use full power for some stupid reason. MC also quite passive. MC quite slow to bang some of the girls like his sister.
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I'm on chapter 159 and I really love the story.
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