Imagine a D&D-style high fantasy world. Now reflect it through a smut-mirror where every class, race and species of monster becomes a perverse, kinky version of itself. What do alchemists in this universe use as common ingredients? S*xual secretions, of course! The strength of this kind of world-building, even five chapters in, is that LynnEllaXXX explores all the ramifications of a s*x-fueled fantasy world, not only in the name of smut but for the growing plot. There are a lot of complications already: a curse with multiple overlapping symptoms, a quest with enough parts to rival the most complicated MMO quest chain, and a host of potential (or actual) enemies and allies. Even with the nascent harem at its very beginnings, the characters are more interesting than stock:

Just five chapters so far at the time of reviewing, but it'll be interesting to see where this goes and how all the potential plots will be resolved, from ex-girlfriends to debts owed. There's a mechanic in play that gives the story more room to breathe despite a ticking clock, so I'm looking forward to some fancy plot / narrative footwork too! It's the equivalent of an ambitious gymnastics routine, but one that could score high from the judges if it lands well.

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So, this series is basically a DnD campaign, but mixed in with Hercules and those 10-12 tasks he had to complete.... and honestly, it works. As I read through the tasks that had to be completed, I couldn't stop laughing at how utterly nonsensical and ridiculous they are. But not in a bad way. It's often a good idea to mix s*x and comedy and this story has all the markings of doing just that. I expected more and longer s*x given the premise, but I was genuinely surprised by how much self-control the author has when they write. Naturally each chapter has it's own level of s*x and ecchi, but actual intercourse between characters is well spaced out. And speaking of well spaced out, each chapter has a decent word word which tries (and mostly) succeeds at introducing new characters, revealing information about characters an developing their relationship. One critique I would lodge is how fast the plot gets going, sometimes forgetting that the audience doesn't know something that the characters already do. A good example of this is referencing the main character needing to be in their female form. I didn't know they even had one until another character mentioned that. back to the pluses, the world building takes it's time which I am grateful for. Some of the naming like 'succu-bitches' etc are a little corny, but as mentioned before, if the ridiculously funny/over the top tasks that need to be completed haven't put you off the story, then you're good to go.

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I feel dirty just reading this. I won't deny that this type of genre is not my type of thing. At all.

However, from an objective point of view, this is freakin' hilarious. The personalities are on-point and fleshed out. I cannot stress it enough, it really feels like a well-built world and none of them feel even close to 2-D, as smut normally is. And the fact that it managed to make me read more than 1 chapter despite it not being my thing is truly a remarkable testament to how well-written it is.

Grammar is perfect, and while I may not continue it, the adventures that he and Breeze are going to have sound freakin' hilarious and honestly, kind of cool.

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