In a world torn apart by endless wars and conflicts, Kai is a Free Shinobi, a mercenary who roams from village to village, taking on any mission that pays well. With his unique abilities to learn any jutsu with just a glance and use them without needing hand seals, he quickly becomes one of the most feared and respected warriors in the land.
But despite his reputation as a skilled and ruthless fighter, Kai is a lonely and isolated figure, with no real connections or attachments to anyone or anything. He spends his days on the battlefield, never staying in one place for too long, and his nights in the arms of various women who try to melt his frozen heart but fail to truly connect with him.
As the years go by, the world around Kai only grows more chaotic and dystopian. Villages fall, people die, and the lines between friend and foe blur until they become meaningless. And yet, Kai continues to wander, taking on mission after mission, making money but never finding any real purpose or meaning in his life.
As the years turn into decades, Kai becomes a legend, a figure of myth and fear to those who know of him. But to Kai himself, he is just a man, lost and adrift in a world that has no place for him. And in the end, he realizes that all of his power and skill, all of his accomplishments and victories, have meant nothing in the face of the endless cycle of war and destruction that has consumed the world around him.
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it'd be pretty good if it weren't for the MC being so f**king edgy, nobody is forcing him top stay by himself. If he's worried about lifespan there are millions of ways to make them live longer.
'As the years turn into decades, Kai becomes a legend, a figure of myth and fear to those who know of him. But to Kai himself, he is just a man, lost and adrift in a world that has no place for him. And in the end, he realizes that all of his power and skill, all of his accomplishments and victories, have meant nothing in the face of the endless cycle of war and destruction that has consumed the world around him.'
this doesn't connect at all to the MC, he's got no place in the world because he moves around constantly, as for his power.. He doesn't f**king use it. He could create an empire for himself; or sect, like in the xianxia fics, and simply create techniques to live longer
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Hmm the story is kinda fast on whats happening, only problem is the MC. I know he wants to be alone or something why has he need to be so edgy.
Also im confuse he does want to be a tool by the hokage but will do job for them. Thats still a tool just having extra with not killing innocent or civillian.
And the setting for is kinda forced on what is happening around him.
Edited: I forgot to mention
Its not that I dont like the novel, Im currently still reading it. Just some small things thats bothering me
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