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it'd be pretty good if it weren't for the MC being so f**king edgy, nobody is forcing him top stay by himself. If he's worried about lifespan there are millions of ways to make them live longer.
'As the years turn into decades, Kai becomes a legend, a figure of myth and fear to those who know of him. But to Kai himself, he is just a man, lost and adrift in a world that has no place for him. And in the end, he realizes that all of his power and skill, all of his accomplishments and victories, have meant nothing in the face of the endless cycle of war and destruction that has consumed the world around him.'
this doesn't connect at all to the MC, he's got no place in the world because he moves around constantly, as for his power.. He doesn't f**king use it. He could create an empire for himself; or sect, like in the xianxia fics, and simply create techniques to live longer
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Hmm the story is kinda fast on whats happening, only problem is the MC. I know he wants to be alone or something why has he need to be so edgy.
Also im confuse he does want to be a tool by the hokage but will do job for them. Thats still a tool just having extra with not killing innocent or civillian.
And the setting for is kinda forced on what is happening around him.
Edited: I forgot to mention
Its not that I dont like the novel, Im currently still reading it. Just some small things thats bothering me
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I like it, I felt comfortable reading, the pace of the story is good and I am very interested with how the story gonna go.
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