Read about 20 chapters of it and it is not worth reading. The bigotry is blatant from the first chapter and it sets the tone for the rest. The translator (yes this is a translation) says they removed most of the "nationalism" but most of it is still suspect at best.

The English is about the level of a grade 8 book so above average for translations but average overall. The story itself is mediocre, every other chapter swaps the scene, pacing is not great, the only redeeming quality is the concept but overall reading this isn't worth reading.

I wish I could enjoy this as it seems like a really funny idea but it just wasn't made well. You would have to re-write the entire thing to make it good. The only reason I even bothered reading was to make a review but it probably wasn't necessary if you read the prologue.  

Side note - This isn't really a critique of this novel in particular but most chinese fan-fics about western media tends to be "nationalistic" at best. I read a few about guys being reincarnated as chinese cartoon characters in Marvel, DC, etc... Even one where a guy was reincarnated in Avatar: The Last Airbender as a firebender that decided to make it "New China" and change the names of everything to chinese ones. Like a deliberate choice and not a translated name as the guy started renaming every conquered country into "New- chinese province name". Overall, just stay away from chinese fan-fics unless you have a love of s*xism and other bigotry being shoved down your throat. 

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so about nationalism in this novel that was mentioned by someone else in his comment - where?

Maybe I was not focused enought, or it was in the first 20 chapters that someone reads, when translators were not used to translating and covering chinese sh*t from orginal novel as they are now.

i do not remember it after reading whole thing up to 180 ch, so it was not so much.

and my suggestions for changes in this novel - I do not know if you translators can change it as it may be important later in novel, but if MC can use items while they are in his iventory, why wearing them on fingers? It is better to hide them in his personal space inside his body, to avoid souron experiences, but as ay say, it may be that someone further in yet untranslated part uses anti souron move on him, so I understand if you can not gange it, f**k, I can not expect you translator to repair orginal author logical mistakes by pointing them for you as you are translating and not writiiing this thing, but  in case you can - why not absorbing enderman hands and nether stars to his personal space, just like his body absorbed enderman hand, mayebe absorbing it to his entire body throught personal space as it is inside his bidy, so he will be able to use they effect throught his entire body, as too much used by only one part is damaging that part of his body due to the fact that his body is not strong, and resistant enought to whithstand it so much power without taking damage, just like overusing his void ring is damaging his hand. 

and to nether star - it is crystalized life and power of wither, and is described that it is power gives warm feeling, can be consideres as white magic, is obadient, protective, a nd strenghtening, so after eating it or absorbing throught his internal space, MC should be able to gather multidimensional energies of universes, like kamar tai sorcerers, but with his magic with nether star characteristics that seems to be opposite to chaos magic, so as much better from normal magic as chaos magic is, but without problems with controling it or side effects of using it lik chaos magic chave, but with passive effects as described above and normal nether star beacon have, strnegtening, healing, protection, and obadiend amgic passively diong what it user wants it to do, basically he should be able to just set parameters for his magic like beacon do, and magic should be able to cause any of beacon effects, with stenght and range based of amound of nether stars absorbed, size of his internal space, strenght of soul and body and so. And thanks to automatic effect he will have free concentraion to use his rings and ender hand, and to focus on battle.

also he should be able to gather more power to cast actual spells, and add certain spells as passive effects too, but retuning to main thought, teh passive, automatic applay of nether star magic energy should be limited, and to use more he should either need to to let his body get damaged, or gather and control it personally, using concentation like when he controls enderman hand and rings powers. 

i write it all becouse I think such powers should logicall possible in this novel power system, and very propably to have they presence. And in case there is something smillar later but completly sh*tty or not logical like chinese novels ofted are. 

Now you have nice, completed, idea fitting to current novel settings, so you do not have to work on it very much. I hope my worh here will help you in upgrading orginal author mistakes and irrational parts if there are any. 

You are doing really good jobs here, thank you for translating tha novel, have a nice days doing it further 

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I really like the idea I think it's really cool I feel the whole aspect of it being a stand could be removed and just make it your own version even if it became a very identical power it would allow something different. On that the writings good so far nothing truly racist or like praise china actually if it wasn't for the name I'd barely notice the nationality this fic is not racist as some others and has an insane update time incrediblly quick 

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