By Simple_Russian_Boi
Danil met an early end. Death at fourteen from heatstroke is not the best thing that could happen to him, but someone intervened. Someone powerfull, someone dark. The Wanderer found a huge potential for magic in his soul, and like an interested ch
There isn't really anything good about this novel. It does have a lot of issues though:
Dropped.
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Cant vibe with MC
the story is not bad for 1st time author
If you dont want to make MC act like a god why did you make him a god?
A divine being or something is more apt for how MC act but not god
If a general act like a private the army is doomed
If a god act like mortal then the relligion is doomed
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waiting...
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Honestly, this is mostly cheap wish fulfilment.
While it does have some action and there is a plot in there, with him growing his powers and developing his influence. Every relationship and character is incredibly basic. With basically every female character turned into the cheapest love interest posible.
While we see him developing his powers and facing threats, everything is overshadowed by how every known heroine just forgets about her personality and is instantly atracted to him, while every word and action he takes just serves to further them in the path of wanting to be with him.
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