This novel does a great job in how it uses the system and the little comedic undertone it has wen people cures at it is so funny. The characters too, they actually sound like people and not just computers that keep going in a dry convo, But I just have one problem and that's the main FMC. She's into girls, that's fine, but it's just how that is causing their relationship to feel more one-sided to me. She's allowed to still sleep with girls but the MC says he gotta "watch" wen she does, ok? Thats fine, but then the 2nd FMC comes and the MC is still trying to understand his feelings for her at that time, and so her being there becomes kinda awkward with the FMC being mad at the MC even tho he told her about this before they got in a relationship. Well now the FMC lusting after her too, and before we know it she's pushing away the MC so he can "repent" for keeping this from her???? And now she's trying to get into 2nd FMCs pants and she ALLOWS it. Now THEY are dating and main FMC says "who cares about him" when 2nd FMC brings up MC. Even tho 2nd FMC just met her and her sole purpose for going back there was MC. This causes the FMCs to get kidnapped cause plot and 2nd FMCs past was still looking for her. MC nearly dies but thanks to a potion he recovers and wen he finally rest they go at (s*x) right next to him as he rests from just saving them!!! Like the main FMC wasn't bout to get raped without him finding them. This is not a harem with the focus being on the MC its a polyamorous relationship where the main FMC has the most benefits in that she can have fun with any of the girls brings home without him even being there and if he is, he "watches". Another peeve is how the author is nerfing his abilities, MC has the power to increase girls pleasure by 80% at this point as well as one that makes his pheromones an aphrodisiac (makes girls horny from 1-100) which can make a girl cum with almost no stimulus if put at 100 after awhile. But guess wat, main FMC makes girl cum 4 times super fast, but MC despiting pushing his pheromones to 100 and having an 80% increase in pleasuring girls makes girl cum 4 times too but loses in speed to the main FMC cause he's a little behind in "Technique"??? I'm sorry, didn't know that was needed with his abilities. *SIGH* besides that this is a really good book, Imma give it 4/5. Don't let my little rant about their relationship, dynamic stop you from reading it. And heck that might their relationship might not affect you, I'm just more used to Harems, not polyamorous relationships.

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First review did t post. Long story short. MC is a simp. He is controlled by his main GF. Even though she can do whatever she likes he has to beg for anything s*xual. He has all the power but she tells the MC what to do. EVEN. Though her biggest fetish is being submissive. Wanted to keep reading but it's turning out to be your typical translation type story. If your thing is an OP simp you will like the sotry

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Review of the work "This S.O.B. System" by "Dasart".

Rating 5/5. Chapter 130.

The quality of the piece is so much better than what I expected from the title and preview that I advise the author to consider a better preview than this. (I have a lot of unnecessary comments, please excuse me)

This will be a long and fairly detailed review. Shortened at the end.

1 Let's start with the main thing: not only the protagonist has a system. This works very well on Earth, although not so well in the League (you need to push the author on this, otherwise all the characters there are without bright systems, which is unrealistic).

2 Let's start with the 2nd important part: despite a significant amount of depravity and lust around the protagonist, the work never ceases to be an interesting fantasy story. But the p*rn is literally part of the plot, so you won't be able to read the plot if you skip all the erotic content. (Well... About 70% of the chapters and above contain 18+ content).

3 important part. NTR, who could ambush the protagonist, is not visible even on the horizon from the men. But from his beloved... Relationships are broken only with some women with whom he did not create emotional intimacy, and did not set a goal to do so. The protagonist also does not hunt for all women in a row. Also, the protagonist does not hunt for someone in a relationship and even sometimes plays the role of cupid with his beloved. (Well, this will offend collectors)

4 s*x Scenes. I have never seen so many role-playing games in one work. It's really worthy of a p*rn system. The detail is not bad, although the satisfaction from the scenes directly depends on the roles in the scene.

5 Harem. Personally, the girls in the harem have good individuality in their stories and psychology. But the s*xual composition lacks spice. 1 alpha female is dominant and full of submissives of different inclinations. It's from the psyche. But physics also has no bright uniqueness, except for alpha. I am not happy with this point (AUTHOR see here).

6 A harsh, sad and tough context is present in the work. I can't say more about this without spoilers. But I didn’t feel the feeling of being “hit on the penis” by the tragedy (and I know how severe tragedy can be, a blow to the penis too... tragedy hurts longer).

7 I liked the plot because of its fresh plot twists. There is intrigue, realism, no plot holes. In general, it feels like this is a finished work and is now just being edited and released.

The plot also has an atmosphere typical of American authors (yes, I have already read enough to feel such a similarity (it will be fun if the author is not American)). This is often the undoing of the works due to the perceived false desire for freedom, equality, etc. (This is almost always so unrealistic that the artificiality of the motivation is visible, as well as the nationalism in Chinese works). And also all the problems with the brains of the protagonists who are filled with this nonsense. (To be fair, most of these MCs are perfect puppets for manipulators, as they basically jump on the first "villain" they come across, mainly because they have a Chaotic Good personality.)

8 The protagonist of this work is basically intelligent, he is also prone to similar “American” behavior. Despite the fact that the author made it so that the MC's name is Lawful Good, the protagonist actually has the characteristics of Chaotic Good or at most Neutral Good, since he does not yet have a sufficiently whole set of rules by which he must act (AUTHOR see here) . MC makes mistakes a lot but is able to admit his mistakes, although I'm not sure about the character growth. Overall, he only made two moves worthy of a hand-to-face maneuver. One thing led to tragedy; another could lead to a "Game Over" if the manipulator did not reveal himself.

9 Combat scenes have varying degrees of detail, which depends on the importance of not only the battle as a whole, but individual moments of the battle. There is no Chinese battle in the style of 1 turn - 1 chapter. (It would be grotesque if I myself had not encountered such a thing.)

10 Characters - in short, the detail is LIVE. Long: Characters have varying levels of detail depending heavily on their level of importance and the MC's familiarity with them. Which is generally good, I wouldn't want to flesh out antagonists for a couple of chapters or other characters with no emotional value. Also, the author basically leaves enough points from which you can build an image of the character.

But a problem arose with the harem: Although there are no questions about the mental component. With physics the answer is different. Either I was reading too quickly or I needed a picture to distinguish them physically, because the image I created of their physiology is often blurred and mixed up. (Already pointed this out, but repeated it).

11 The world building has a Star Trek vibe to it. Most likely this is due to the legal structure of the League and the System. I don't think I can say more.

1System+ (better than usual)

2The ratio of erotica and history ++- (the plot is not forgotten much, sometimes too much)

3NTR + (+) - (it doesn’t exist, it’s not expected from men, Bi is too arrogant)

4s*x ++- (detailed, role-playing games, role-playing games).

5Harem +-- (intact individuals, submissives are physically and s*xually similar to each other)

6Hardcore+-+ (Tolerable, sad (well, why the f**k), realistic)

7Plot+-+- (good move, American illusions, look at reality?, boring systems in the League).

8Protagonist+--+-- (he is not an imbecile; American illusions; Chaotic Good, not Lawful; understanding of the consequences of his actions; well, damn, what about bro; he were played like a fiddle)

9Combat+-+ (details are not enough, an attempt to include the fighting style of a real incubus)

10Characters ++--- (many, solid personalities, no powerful antagonist, I want a photo, the harem sometimes looks like clones with different personalities)

11World +? (not template, prosthetic system, little else is known about the world)

12 Chapter release rate (no idea, I just read it).

Was translated with Machine Translation. 

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This isn’t a review of the story, I haven’t read any of it.  I just couldn’t resist commenting on a line I saw in the description that I found pretty humorous.  The author says  “There is some minor traumatizing content that I didn’t mark... I felt like it hits harder without the warning”.  Well, they aren’t wrong, but they seem to hilariously miss the entire point of the tags.

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Came for the smut, stayed for the story. Highly recommend you give it a read. 

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This is one of the best litRpg's out here. It has s*x in it however it is plot driven s*x so it's great on more than one level.  For those of you who came here for plot and are used to more secure of proud MC's and are reading this review to consider continuing the read please read ahead the MC is not an island and interacts with others in a more belivable way. He gets wiser and stronger as the story continues.  There are layers of plot present in this and holes in the first chapters will get resolved later. The system is an SOB but like a harsh mother it seems to make its recipients stronger 4 it. 5/5 recommend reading. 

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