I have read to chapter 7 and I believe that this novel has great potential. I like how it is developing and have great hopes for the main characters cultivation system.

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I like it

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started good but this story really made me annoyed really quickly.

reason:----  all the cliche of cultivation world:--  cultivators killing whole villages for no benefit, no reason, for nothing really...  I mean no fking way so many cultivator just kills whole villages just cause they are evil cultivator.....  so yeah everyone is evil for no reason or benefit..

and worst thing is :--  I had read 6 chapter about how a demonic cutivator is killing villegers for no reason  and it's still going on.  yeah every chapterr is full of cultivator saying bulsh*t cruel words and villegers crying....  everyone is unresonable.....  imagine my frustation reading so much unresonable bulsh*t for so many chapters... 

and yes author had decided to introduce some heaven chosen bulsh*t but that's not really the problem, but the problem is that this story still following all those xinxia cliche and making it leanthy.  like dozens of chapter about how a cultivator cruelly killing a random no name village....

  advice:--  don't follow all the xixia bulsh*t.  use some creativily..  make character's take logical choice  (including evil) as people only take actions for benefit  or sometimes love or jeleousy ....  so I prefer there should be atlest some logic behind character's action..  and stop making everything barbaric..

that's all about the complain

rest of the story is good.  way better than typical xinxia.

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