An innocent boy from Earth who was sheltered all his life finds himself reincarnated into a world full of magic, a world as beautiful as it is horrifying. Fate brings him together with his new loving mother and sister, and they face the trials together as a family. Follow their incredible story as they struggle to survive and create a better life for themselves.
🔞Warning:
This novel contains explicit adult themes and "complex" relationships between family members. However, if you're here only for NSFW content, you will likely be disappointed. It's a large, character-driven, slow-burn novel, so expect a lot of details, a slow pace, and big chapters. If it is not something you like, please kindly ignore this title.
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So you should try to read it but IMO It's too descriptive. The pacing is way too slow. The synopsis said slow burn but I didn't think it would be this bad. I mean 18 chapters and I feel like i've walked through mud.
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Unfortunately the MC makes no sense with his backstory.He was around 20 when he died and had older brothers, but doesn't even know what an erection is.mentally challengedseverely sheltered child.Read More
The writing style is really, really nice. If you like quality writing, you'll like this novel. However, it's too slow. I don't mean it's "really slow", I mean it's objectively "too slow". Over 400 pages of text and the story only contains about 250 pages worth of progression material. Anyway, the descriptive language is absolutely beautiful, but the pacing makes it kind of a grind to read. But if you like milk fetish stuff, this is the novel for you.
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This novel is a true work of art about to demonstrate its mesmerizing brilliance, if you are looking for a story that will move you to the depths of your soul, this is the right choice
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Pace is really really slow, but damn did it keep me captivated with all its heart felt moments. FYI I read from chapter 1-59 in less than 1 day
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The MC feels off though and doesn't quite match the age given when he dies. His thoughts and knowledge don't align well to what is readily available for the time period of his previous life. Just because he had physical issue doesn't mean is mind was that of a rock (and would for sure have knowledge and not reacted the way he does about erections). I would go back and rewrite some of the previous chapters to match his estimation for age and knowledge he should have. MC was able to read books in his previous life so some basic knowledge should be known. The story has well written descriptions but maybe a little too many... it makes the story drag out and seem slow. I would much rather have this than a fast paced nothing is described story. It for sure helps you imagine/visualize what is going on. Overall there isn't too much to critique with the plot as not much is occurring yet. In summary, MC needs some work, descriptions are good if a little too numerous, plot is slow but well thought out, and not a lot of huge time skipping which is good.
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Very good, the way the author explains and gives information about the story using various characters' points of view is very good
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This is actually pretty good. The writing is immaculate and the characters are portrayed amazingly. We haven't seen much worldbuilding yet, but that's a given since the MC is still a baby. The reincarnation part was quite unique and not just some guy dying to a truck. I have high hopes for this series, hope the author keeps this up.
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I give this 4.5/5 which I am rounding off to 5.0 rating.
Now let me be fair without being as unbiased as possible so you can benefit from this review.
The Cons:
1-) Pacing : The pace is so absurdly slow that I dont think I have seen the pace this slow ever. Now to be fair I knew this is more slice of life oriented story with a proper buildup and not some instant gratification but even after that very little happens in each chapter except for few. Now, I binged this till chapter 53 because chapters were already uploaded till 87 but even then I was skipping some dialogues and speed reading some chapters. Now thats saying something because I am the guy who actually loves filler because they make characters grounded and realistic. But in my opinion, some chapters and dialogues could be skipped without sacrificing the character development.
2-) Upload Schedule: The Author uploads 1 chapter/week. You might argue that its a long chapter so whats the problem? The problem is 1 chapter/week with a pace of story progression this slow is a negative aspect in my opinion. Even after 53 chapters the MC and his sister are not even teens yet. If this is the upload schedule then we are looking at years possible a decade (this might be exaggeration) before this story get finished because the amount of potential this story have is INSANE.
Pros :
1-) Writing quality surpasses the standard of this website : Yeah you read that right. One of the few stories on this site that have this level of standard. Nothing else needs to be said.
2-) Character Development: The way this author balances "the showing" and "telling" of character interaction and their dept is just phenomenal. In fact there is no way you won't become emotionally invested in the characters
3-) The Opening chapter: I dare you, you wont find a better opening chapter of ANY story on the internet EVER. In fact, I would have given this story 5 stars full ratings if the author just posted the opening chapter and died leaving this story incomplete. Yes, its that good. A truly tear jerker chapter. After the end of that chapter I felt like I was watching a movie, and end of an epic man. F**king masterpiece chapter.
4-) The Art: The NSFW ones are locked behind the paywall as of writing this review but lets be honest at least the author bothered to give us freeloaders some high-tier art occasionally in each chapter which helped with our imagination. Goes to show how much the author cares for his readers. Thats a W for me man.
Final feedback to the author: If you are reading this dear author. Then listen mate, after reading your story I knew that you are taking this sh*t seriously and worked your ass off in creating this masterpiece and I know you said to not read if you are coming in just for the smut. But come on man 53 chaps and no smut? Yeah I know it starts later but I am gonna be honest I still picked this up for the smut. Please increase the pace of this story or the upload schedule if its possible and include more smut scenes in the future. I am gonna stack this story for a year now and hope that the next time I pick this up again from chapter 53. I have more smut scenes to read. Thanks for writing this masterpiece.
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Surprisingly, it is very well-written and engaging. The characters feel real, and the plot is moving. Keep up the good work.
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