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Matheus, a brilliant young man with an extremely high IQ, born from a humble family, but at the age of 23, in the midst of a great discovery, he stumbles and finds himself sent to a Murim World!
There he suffered prejudice, but intelligent as he was, he relied on the government to prosper in secret, but in conflicts he ended up being found and because he was a foreigner in everyone's view, he was captured, tortured and in prison he met his tragic end.
But the heavens gave him a second life, in the same world where he shone, achieving several incredible and inhuman achievements, using science to explain the phenomena.
But before his 40th birthday, he died. His heinous acts attracted the attention of the Orthodox Faction, who investigated and soon started a war with his clan to find out the truth and he died in the process, without being able to use all his knowledge and research to their full potential!
But again a new opportunity was given to him, where he ended up in another world, where it seems that the rules of this world are different, will he be able to use all his knowledge and experience in this new world that is governed by game rules?
- 34 – Answers and Actions!Apr 20, 2024
- 33 – Patience!Apr 11, 2024
- 32 – First Confrontation!Apr 8, 2024
- 31 – A New Mission!Mar 25, 2024
- 30 – Blacksmith!Mar 23, 2024
- A short break!Mar 6, 2024
- 29 – Discoveries! (End of Volume 1)Mar 5, 2024
- 28 – Marching!Mar 3, 2024
- 27 – Supporter!Mar 2, 2024
- 26 – Banquet! (II)Feb 19, 2024
- 25 – Banquet! (I)Feb 18, 2024
- Announcement(Important, Read!)Feb 10, 2024
- 24 – Epiphany!Feb 10, 2024
- 23 – Repercussion!Jan 28, 2024
- 22 – Despair!Jan 27, 2024
- 489 reading
- 86 plan to read
- 9 completed
- 9 paused
- 33 dropped
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This is going to prabably sound overly harsh. I really don't intend to to be, but it's like a cigarette burn on a beautiful painting. Even if it's a small mark, it dominates one's thoughts when looking.
So the good. The story, world building, characters, all done fairly well. I especially love how the author uses a modified D&D system and the various rolls for combat and social situations is quite clever. The fact that this is the third world and second form of magic the main character has to deal with makes for an interesting set up.
And now the bad. It's obvious the author doesn't speak English as a first language. So writing a story in English is nothing short of admirable. I would not be able to do the reverse. But because of this, there is some sentence structure that doesn't quite feel right, or odd phrases that may make better sense in the original language.
But then there are the pronouns. He, she, it, they, you, and any derivative if these you can think of, are all thrown in a mixer and spat back out at seemingly random. It's such a minor thing, but it bugs me to no end! If two people of the opposite gender interact, it gets super confusing when "her" and "his" keep swapping characters.
Overall, there is a LOT to like about this story. But just be warned there are some minor grammatical mistakes that can be quite annoying to sift through.
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