Afterlife wasn't something that he had thought about, or maybe he had, the downside of being thrust into a new world with your memories wiped and having no recollections of any dreams was disorienting.
...but then again he chose this path, now in a sexualized version of the original novel. How much can magic, which depends on strong emotions could be driven by Lust and Desire?
Warning! The story contains and centers around Smut, there is plenty of plot to go around but if you want to avoid the smut entirely, it might be a little difficult!!
I would give it a 9 out of 5 stars. Big downside is not enough of chapters. Good MC who isnt an idiot. Good story and plot. No grammar issues. Can only wait for more since author wants to have a normal life... Great story. Not everyone will like it, some people don’t like bacon. It just means they aren’t really peop
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Excellent. Usual fanfics stick to maintaining the original route but this one shows promise of deviations to the main story line. Good changes though considering the story has me into it rather than just for the smut.
MC seems interesting, character wise and his actions. The characters interacting with him also seem to have personalities of their own.
Only issue is chapters; author, please more chapters but don't rush. I'll most likely visit this novel again after a couple of months.
Happy new year to all.
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Good plot and nice smut scenes. The story doesn't feel like you need to know about the harry potter lore beforehand and its nicely narrated.
I really like that the author chose to make some changes and not only depend on what the movies or books provided.
Grammar is good, with some typos here and there, but still pretty readable and well written.
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