Determined to assist her father in his research, Prim follows him as they journey toward a nearby dungeon, where an enigmatic ritual will be held. Betrayed at the last second by her sole remaining family member, it is only a young priestess' words that save her from slavery or worse. Instead of being bound to the dungeon for all eternity and abused in ways she can only imagine, Prim finds herself in the loving care of a goddess she barely knows anything about.
Before she realizes it, Prim, now Kiomi, is the lord of her very own dungeon, one that she will fill with many wonders and... foxes.
Kinda early for a review, but I think I've seen enough to write one. (Also do note that I'm not the best at writing reviews.)
It's fun read and all, you should definitely read it. The grammar is consistent, I haven't seen many errors at all. The characters by far are pretty interesting and unique, none of them feels "2d".
Also another quality I like is the dungeon map wich is updated most of the time after every notable change. Also the hand drawn illustrations of the characters is just icing on the cake, it is however paired occasionally with ai illustrations.
I think that wraps up the review, go read it and all. You won't regret it.
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A good read thus far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.
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Easily one of (if not the) best novel on this site.
It's not perfect, but it's more than enough.
The story proceeds with the right speed, and direction; without resulting boring or forced.
Finally a story that doesn't s*xualize the fox girls!
Very cute, with both heartwarming and heartbreaking moments ~
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Fox goddess makes a foxgirl who makes cute foxes who make baby foxes who will repopulate the fox world with foxes. Great story all around and a pretty consistant update schedule so far. Definently worth a read
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It's not my kind of story. Too much fluff for my taste. I prefer fluff with a side of sadistic torture and slaughter where vengeance is enacted gratuitously.
it has some tension with some evil selfish characters but the overall plot is far too friendly as indicated by the adventurer-catering dungeon rules which are as of chapter 10 not being attempted to be bypassed. Such a thing is strongly implied by the tags and the picture, but I was hoping that there'd be more hidden gems, so I gave it a bit of a shot. I write this review to warn similar readers away from this story.
Otherwise, the grammar and spelling are fine, sentence structure is easy to read, and characters are somewhat realistic. You might think that there's an overly naive MC but I can assure you that it's at least close to possible IRL. Neglectful parenting with tendencies toward rage and just a smidgeon of a taste of affection while also being isolated from other human contact can create such an MC if they haven't already decided to close off their heart to all human affections in order to protect it from further disappointments.
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Fantastic story. I suck at reviews though so I'll leave it at that and just tell you to go read it already since you obviously are interested enough in the story to check reviews.
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To be open: I may have a strong bias in favor of kitsune in general, and redhead kitsune avatars of dungeons specifically (insert two-nickles meme). :D
That said, let's get into this. So, I love the story overall. The theming leans strongly toward the sweet and uplifting, but is also keeping to the general premise of a dungeon being a place where one can test one's combat prowess.
Also, I need to protect and pet the fox girl.
*ahem*
Style:
I like the style in general, despite normally preferring 3rd person. The author executes 1st person pretty well. There is something a little 'rushed' about the writing style, but I can't tell you exactly what it is, and it's a minor issue at worst.
Story:
Found Family, bright future, challenges to overcome, friends to make, and enemies to defeat. It's a nicely rounded dungeon story.
Grammar:
The author is pretty good with only occasional typos or mistakes that they act quickly to correct when pointed out.
Characters:
The most central characters really shine, with the majority of the character development being held by the MC alone as she has almost all the screen time. So it's just the nature of the beast. But we do get to see the development and fleshing out of her allies too, just not as much so.
So, yeah. Go read it. :)
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