Peter had thought that he would die that day, yet he lives now, with such powers he had never thought of even in his dreams. He admired a Spider, tried to be a Lizard but now he faces the world as a Dragon.
Witness Peter Parker in a completely different form you have never seen before in his journey throughout the multiverse of Marvel.
This is a Marvel fanfiction with elements from various other fictions.
Seems like an interesting plot, changing the spider to a dragon.
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My issues with the story are as thus. The author has us read a discussion that we see the outcome of and then the MC just repeats it in his head making me and every reader read it twice for no gain.
Second issue is the whole Ancient one debacle that is her title. The author just does not use the word THE before ancient one so it just reads wrong. Every sentence with her title/moniker is like that.
"Ancient one helped me with "instead of the correct "The Ancient one helped me with". Ancient one is not her name. I don't get why you think it is. If he's greeting her he would say Ancient one. If he's talking in his head its The Ancient one and the same if he's talking to others about her.
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