i believe this is a great story if it continues to the end and is not left haitus and that is why I am writing this to  encourage author for more. The story has a very great plot. The S. Scenes are great and engaging even if you are not the type to read smut and jerk it is still engaging and seriously I learned a lot of things from the scenes now I don't know if these psychological things are normal or weird but I realized some of my fetishes and the reasons for my behaviors that I had never thought about. It was an eye opener and made me try one new thing I never would have normally. And let's face making a change to someones life is a big achievement. The characters are very engaging and amazing they have history and lore. The magic system and the world is quite solid frankly. The only issue I have seen is that the so called top of food chain the big dogs are quite weak. Not in the story no inside the story they are quite strong but since the story is built logical and with a system and a science behind it there is no god moving his hand and the world changing and stuff. Yes there might be someone using a billion line code like magic to make a ritualistic summoning for example but no random power boost for no reason. You can kill a mage by surprise and skill matter. Not every stereotype is possible but many of them are there. To sum it up I really enjoyed the novel thus far and wish to read more I will obviously read to the last chapter posted here but I wanted to be more encouraging and help the author by a review. If there is any other way to be more helpful author-sama I'll be happy to help. P.S. The author's note are great it is like reading the lore of the famous "from software" games item description. Kinda fun kinda frustrating although I wish he would have been more mysterious in descriptions and kinda hide it in side the text ? Like using identify on objects if someone wanted to learn more about the story they must be persistent and see the spoilers and double check data and reach conclusions about the story that is hidden from normal readers. Wish you the best

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