Story is not bad. 

The system is interesting as MC use different insect, zerg, and human insect to fight.

Cons, the s3x scene are just implied and are during dialogues while discussing something which keeps on happening. Very confusing the plot and s3x scene should be separated.

 Cons, chapter100 the naruto plot haven't change much, MC is just grinding in the background.

Cons, MC needs to turn ninja into zerg for more power but delays for so long cause of stupid reason like not wanting people to notice. 

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Edit: sorry changed the rating from 5 to 3. Story is nice but the writing style is starting to get on my nerves. Several readers have already pointed out but the way author keeps mixing serious plot scenes with background Ahh, Umph etc sounds implying they are non stop f**king in middle of every conversation is disturbing. This is made worse by the fact there are no separate smut scenes. Entire time smut is just implied in form of euphemisms and this is done repeatedly until it becomes frustrating to read. It would have been better if author completely dropped smut or atleast wrote it separately but now it is just disturbing to read these grunts and s*x sounds in middle of serious strategy planning etc. 

There are no issues so far with the English or Grammar which definitely makes it easier to read. 

Also it is somewhat unique and different from other Naruto fanfics so I still recommend reading this yourself to see if you like it. 

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I'll be honest I liked this story, but I have issues with it. It's entertaining enough, but the smut is honestly a pain to read. Not because it's bad, but due to it being written using euphemisms and innuendos. It took me 2-3 R-18 chapters and looking at the comments to figure out where the smut was. Once I did sure I enjoyed a few of the R-18 chapters written like that, but every R-18 chapter written like that is unpleasant. If that was all I would have given this a 3 or a 4 if the author started doing normal smut or just fade to black, but then they went and made a character that was basically just a meme. Not even a meme character that would be related to either source material. I almost dropped the story, I genuinely enjoy it otherwise so I'll still read it, but it completely broke my enjoyment and ability to read it for a bit there. In short it's readable and enjoyable but the smut can be difficult and expect characters from other fandoms to have a chance to just randomly be placed into the story with little justification.

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