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the MC is a weak willed introvert MC that gets bullied into s*x with adopted family his family.... according to the author, he had no choice but to be forced into s*x acts....
the grammar and writing are pretty bad, sounds like a non-native English speaker wrote this.
the synopsis got me interested but the MC being a weak willed MC that gets plot armored into his love story sucks. he literally got blackmailed into masturbating and he just takes the blackmail and be all weak and scared and not willing to do anything but obey.... disappointing.
could have made this a story about the older sister bullying her adoptive brother into being with her. would have been a better story then reading about the introvert MC who is over 20 but doesn't understand relations. the author could have wrote a better story if the MC wasn't a 20year old virgin who doesn't understand women.... ignorant/accidental/plot-armor MC tropes work better in comedy or comic/anime stories. in writing, the story needs more context and back story to make it palatable.
Might edit this later if things change.
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