Ethan is a college student. He is a model student who always does his assignments on time and has a high GPA score. He lives with her sister, Celia Strongheart, in a small house in Ironshade Town. Ethan's father died a year ago in an accident, while his mother, who had remarried, moved to another city, leaving them behind.
Later, he found out that his father was a demon hunter who was killed by demons. Ethan and his younger sister experienced financial difficulties for a year after his father's death because he only relied on money sent by his mother and from working part-time as a private tutor. Finally, Ethan decided to find a permanent job which led to his death and came back to life as an incubus named Damian Lucio.
Body Description:
He's about medium height with a friendly face and beige skin colour. His hair is slightly curly brown and a little messy. His brown eyes have a gentle gaze. His body was slightly thin compared to men of his age and without muscles which make him feel insecure. He usually wears a simple t-shirt with a sweater to cover his skinny body, jeans and a brown sling bag almost every day.
Damian is a handsome incubus who can make every woman fall in love with him in just one glance. He has a wild personality, good at seducing women, brave and confident. Influenced by his race as a demon, he is a dominant who dislikes anyone who tries to take or disturb his partners, family or friends, as well as a manipulator who can make his partners surrender themselves without any violence.
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Damian is taller than Ethan, has sharp brown eyes (red if he is in his demonic form), good posture, and athletically tall. His face is more handsome than a supermodel. His hair dark blue hair is half messy with bangs that formed a comma on one side while the rest is neatly combed back. He usually wears a neat suit because of his profession as a prostitute.
Ethan's younger sister. Celia was a cheerful girl, but after their father's death, her attitude towards Ethan turned cold. Ethan thought she blamed him for their father's death but Celia finally admits she did it to stay away because she had feelings for him. Celia is very fond of cooking and is diligent in keeping the house clean, even she decided to continue it to culinary school, Alumore College.
Body Description:
She's a little shorter than Ethan, has a cute face, brown eye colour with energetic gaze, beige skin colour and C-cup breast size. Her straight brown hair is covering to the middle of her back with bangs. She has a slender waist, no muscle tone, toned hands, and small feet. She usually wears a simple t-shirt with a skirt that usually in pink and wears no makeup except her favourite pink parfait lipstick.
Lilieth (DLS) Before turning into a Succubus, Lilieth was a princess from the kingdom of Euthenia named Eve. Her husband, the crown prince of Aeros, Reyn Whitelight, betrayed her on her wedding day and killed her entire family, even sacrificing her to the strongest demon lord, Damon Arcano Malignus. But in the end, Damon offered her a contract to become his succubus and gave her power for revenge. She accepted his offer since she had no choice. Although their relationship was originally based on a contract, they eventually fell in love with each other. Lilieth is the name that Damon gave her after she turned into a succubus.
Lilieth is a mysterious royal succubus that helps Ethan from the rat demons and turns him into an incubus. She's the one who told Ethan about the crack between the dark dimension and the human world and also taught him how to control his alter ego. She was the admin of Ethan's The Incubus System before she opened his access to it and turned Ethan into a High Incubus.
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She has a beautiful face, coral lips and seductive eyes that make it difficult for all men to reject her. She's about medium height, fair skin colour and E-cup breast size. Her appearance looks seductive yet wicked at the same time. Her long purple hair is covering her back up above her buttocks. Her brown (red if she is in her demonic form) eye colour has an alluring gaze. She has a slender body like a model with no muscle tone, but behind it, she has the power of a strong Royal Succubus. She usually wears a tight outfit which is formed from her hair to make it easier for her to move.
A rich woman who married through arranged marriage at a young age. At the age of 35, she already has an 18-year-old daughter. Even though she was not happy with her marriage's life, but she still tried to keep it, unfortunately, her husband brought his affair home and demanded a divorce. In a state of depression, she decided to go to Ledred, a male prostitution district in Nighthallow City, to do a one-night stand with a prostitute just to vent her frustration and disappointment. But in the end, she met Damian and eventually fell in love with him.
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She's about medium height, beige skin colour and D-cup breast size. Her appearance looks fragile and feminine with a soft gaze making her different from her tomboyish daughter (Olivia Creststream). Her straight brown hair is covering her back up above her buttocks. Her cyan eye colour makes her even more attractive. She has slender hands, no muscle tone, a narrow waist, toned legs, and small feet. She usually wears a mini dress with a coat that is mostly black, a thin makeup with sandy pink lipstick and wears no jewellery.
A female student at Diamond College who has a tomboyish appearance. She is a skilled female martial artist and is feared by all men for her fierce attitude. Olivia has fierce eyes that are completely different from her mother (Camila Creststream) since she got it from her father. She is Emma Lunaspark's best friend as well as her classmate, their relationship is so close that everyone says she is Emma's bodyguard. She considers all men as a virus that deserves to be exterminated from this world since she often sees her father mistreating her mother, but Ethan changes her mind. Olivia became interested in Ethan after he lent his sweater to Olivia and began to fall in love after Ethan accompanied her to find her mother in a prostitution district, Ledred.
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She has a tomboyish appearance with fierce eyes that makes her feared by men and makes her different from her feminine mother (Camila Creststream). Her short straight brown hair is hanging up to her neck. Unlike her mother who had a soft gaze with a cyan eye colour, she has a fierce gaze and black eye colour, the same eye colour as her father. As a martial art, she has an athletic body with toned muscles, especially her arms and legs. She is slightly taller, has darker skin compared to Camila and C-cup breast size. She usually wears a simple t-shirt with a boyish jacket (she started wearing this after an embarrassing incident that made Ethan lent his sweater to her) and jeans. She never wears makeup so her lips remain in a natural colour and wears no jewellery.
A female student at Diamond College who has a feminine appearance and Olivia's best friend. Ethan has been in love with her since his first semester at Diamond College, but because Emma came from a rich family, Ethan decided to keep quiet and watch her from afar without daring to say hi. After Ethan turned into an incubus, he finally mustered up his courage to carry out his quest that connected to her and later he rescued her from the Rat Demons. He knows his father's real profession as a demon hunter from her since Emma is one of his father's discipline.
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She has a sweet face, a gorgeous body with a soft gaze. Her shoulder-length silver hair, slightly curly with purple eye colour. As a demon hunter, she has an athletic body with toned arms and legs but not over, her waist remains slim making her look feminine. She has the same height as Olivia, has fair skin and C-cup breast size. She usually wears a feminine dress, but when she is on patrol she will wear a tight demon hunter uniform with a hood that covers her hair and face. She never wears makeup, except her favourite peach lipstick.
A 118 old fox demon who fled from the Hounds who wanted to make her their bride. She was almost raped by the Hounds but Ethan helped her and eventually made her as his servant so she wouldn't have to kill humans to survive in the human world.
Body Description:
She has an innocent face, a small body and blonde hair that hanging to her neck. Her red eyes have energetic gaze. She is a little short with beige skin and B-cup breast size. She usually wears a yellow hoodie and a black skirt and never wears makeup. Her ears which are shaped like fox ears are black and her two tails are yellow.
She is a crown princess of the Serpent Rock kingdom who is currently in exile period. During her exile, she lived as a commoner without any help from her kingdom. She lives next door to Ethan's house and is always helping him and his sister especially since Ethan's father passed away. She is an independent girl who is full of passion and easy to get along with. She met Damian in Nighthallow City when she was heartbroken and nearly became demons' meal. Eventually, she falls in love with Damian after he helps her to soothe her mating period pain and accepts her unusual sex habit that makes her difficult to get a boyfriend.
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She has an elegant face with sharp black eyes, ivory skin colour and E-cup breast size. Her straight maroon hair is covering her back up above her buttocks. Usually, she wears office attire, such as a shirt with a blazer and skirt, besides that, she wears a simple mini dress. Her long tail is red with golden scales. Despite she has no muscle like Olivia but she has toned abs. She usually wears a thin makeup with sugar plum lipstick.
She is the Ledred District's ruler, a red light district specifically for male prostitution. She leaves from her home on Treasure Reef Island to the Vihrasil continent in search of her ideal man. With her wealth and talent, she deliberately changes a small district in Nighthallow City into a red light district since she wants to find a wild man who can conquer her among male prostitutes. Like the other Kraken's descendants, she has high pride and likes to play with newbie male prostitutes. She is usually at the Sea Devil Club, the biggest and most famous club in the district to have fun with the male prostitutes she chooses for a night. Later she falls in love with Damian after she finds two sides in him, even obsessing over taming him.
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She has a cute face with eyes full of dignity. She's about medium height, pale skin colours like a vampire and D-cup breast size. She has shoulder-length, slightly curly, indigo hair with blue sapphire eye colour. Her favourite outfit is a black mini dress with deep cleavage, showing her sexy body clearly. And she can change her eight tentacles into ordinary human feet because of her royal blood lineage. Her tentacles have the same pale colour as her skin with a faint purple colour in some parts. She has a slender waist, no muscle tone and wears a thin makeup with nude lipstick.
She is the Diamond College's owner, the best College in Republic Aeros and Pearl's twin sister. Just like Pearl, she leaves Treasure Reef Island in search of her ideal man who is always described as a perfect gentleman. Even though they are twins but different from Pearl who likes to play around, Diamond has higher intelligence than her twins, making her think she is even higher than the others even among the Kraken's descendants itself. Later she falls in love with Ethan after he makes her swallow her own trap, even making her obey him after Ethan shows his dominance.
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She has the same appearance as Pearl, what distinguishes them is that Diamond has a small mole under her right eye and softer gaze. Besides that, her favourite outfit is a turtleneck sweater with a skirt, sometimes she wears round glasses. Even though she has the same hair colour and length, she prefers to braid or tie her hair to the side.
She is a cafe manager at Tutty Fruity Maid Cafe, Peace Blossom Square, Ironshade Town and also an advanced demon hunter. She has a cute face with a sweet smile that makes boys fall in love with her. She became interested and obsessed with Ethan after he saved her in her cafe using his Hell Thunder.
She is Ravenetwork's owner who often participates in interviewing the victims or the demon hunters who are involved in demon attack incidents. She becomes interested in Ethan after she guesses he is the one who helped Diamond in the Cretunt Bridge incident, so she tries to interview him, but he avoids her since he thinks Elenna's profession is too dangerous for his identity.
He is Diamond College's student and also a good friend of Ethan since childhood. Despite his dramatic and childish attitude, he is very concerned about Ethan. Later, Ethan discovers that Larry is a top demon hunter as well as one of Ethan's stalker disciples, Ruby.
Tania (DLS) is a Dark Elf healer. Her tribe almost became extinct after a big conflict with the elves before finally deciding to exile and cover themselves by using the Tome Of Darkness to create an illusion wall. Later, she fell in love with Sarael, a necromancer who accidentally got lost in her tribe territory. And finally made a contract with Lilieth who turned her into a demon so she could heal Sarael .
Tania (TIS) thousand years have passed after the great battle in Lightglen City. Tania is Lilieth's trustee Demon General who has extraordinary healing skills. She and three other Demon Generals assigned to solve the crack problem between the human world and the dark dimension also took care of the demons who were trying to escape to the human world.
She is one of the dark dimension's elite soldiers. The daughter of the demon general, Sarael the necromancer and Tania the healer. Like other elite soldiers, she has to patrol and close the crack that appears in the human world. Lord Damon has prepared her and three other elite soldiers as the future demon generals to serve Damian.
She is one of the dark dimension's elite soldiers. The daughter of the demon general, Andrew the tentacle monster and Kitty the cat hybrid-beast. Like other elite soldiers, she has to patrol and close the crack that appears in the human world. Lord Damon has prepared her and three other elite soldiers as the future demon generals to serve Damian.
She is Ethan's stepfather's daughter from his first marriage. After his mother decides to remarry, she moves into an apartment to live with Ethan's mother and his stepfather. Their unexpected reunion at the hospital makes Ethan hope to get a clue about his mother's whereabouts. But instead, it makes Ethan even more confused. Just like Larry and Emma, she is also a demon hunter.
She is one of the dark dimension's elite soldiers. The daughter of the noble priestess demon. Like other elite soldiers, she has to patrol and close the crack that appears in the human world. Lord Damon has prepared her and three other elite soldiers as the future demon generals to serve Damian.
The Demon Hunter uniform has a different color list indicating the wearer's position.
*White - Newbie / New recruit
*Green - Rookie.
*Blue - Top
*Purple - Advance
*Black - Chairman
While Shadow has a yellow list with the symbol of the Demon hunter organization on the chest.
She is one of the dark dimension's elite soldiers. The daughter of the noble lust demon. Like other elite soldiers, she has to patrol and close the crack that appears in the human world. Lord Damon has prepared her and three other elite soldiers as the future demon generals to serve Damian.
She is the Tempestechnology's owner as well as an ex-advanced demon hunter. After she meets and falls in love with an incubus named Zael, she tries to create a magic tech to open the way to the dark dimension. She is also the main cause of Ethan's father's death.
Kir is Lord Damon's messenger and his mansion's guard. Despite his cute appearance and childish voice, his fighting/battle form is scarier than a rat demon. In his fighting form, his level is around elite soldier's.
She is Erebus' aunt. One of the high angels of the light dimension.
A thousand years ago, she went to the human world to help and protect Erebus upon her mother's request. But the situation was worse than she thought and she ended up trapped in the crystal.
Eventually, she met Ethan, who was trying to free her from the crystal and mistook him as Erebus.
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I don't recommend any reader to read these type of stories anymore, because they are just smut focused. And it can quickly rot your brain later on. Also, they don't have that much of nice plot. So I do recommend that you the reader find something more interesting and fun. Stay safe everyone and be careful!
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Alright so.... confession time. I started reading the story because I was expecting a lot of s*x scenes. There I said it... But, there is more to this story than just smut.
This story has a lot more to offer. It is not just about him mindlessly having s*x. There is character development, moral issues, family issues, and a plot that is much bigger than you may have initially thought.
I don't want to shed too much light into the story. I want you to read this story with whatever precognition you may have about it, and be blown away by some of the best story telling I have ever seen for a story about a guy having s*x.
If you can get over the s*x, and over the tags (which were quite enticing lol) and read this story for the plot, yes the plot, not the s*x... you are going to be very pleased by it.
I hope you give it a try. It is definitely worth a read... now excuse me. I have to, um, "relief" my self.
P.S
I don't know if it's just me, but doesn't the head of the girl in the cover picture for the story look like it is floating off the body? Almost like her hands are holding it and not her neck? It was throwing me off so I wanted to make other people see it too. Then I won't be the only crazy person 0_0
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The writing quality, the character interactions and most of the plot are all very well done. Everything else though has issues.
The story has one pace that never changes, which doesn't feel slow and seems fine at first but becomes a problem with the timescale involved. Over the course of roughly a week, the MC goes from a wimpy single man into a prince with a harem of a dozen of women. Not a single woman even disagrees with the scenario and with how short the timeframe is it's just not believable and undermines their characters. Moreover with how much is crammed into such a short period of time (new characters, s*x, combat, travel, repeat) the story has to keep constantly bouncing and shuffling. It makes it feel like the MC has no control and lacks agency, and that character arcs are snipped short to fit in the next. The story and timeframe is too cramped.
The common harem problems also apply in this novel. Girls with no meaningful background or personality being added into the group in an instant. (4 demon gals all at once) Meaningful members of the group losing screen time and becoming rather one dimensional in character. (Celia loves the MC despite everything and that's about as far as her character development got) The harem is too rushed and too large. The way in which it's implemented (rushed) lowers the quality of the story as a whole, and devalues the characters within it.
The lemon scenes are another problem. The character interactions and the lead up are fine, but the actual scenes themselves are to put it simply; not good. Every lemon reads exactly the same just with a different gal and lead up. There's very little feel, description or depth. For someone who literally sells s*x chapters/scenes/pics/audio clips and whatnot on Patreon, the quality should be far better and not feel like flat repetition.
'Literotica' or 's*xstories' are both free and much better for that sort of thing.
Similar to the lemons, the combat scenes have the exact same problem. As long as you know the characters involved and skim their interactions the rest is useless. You can safely assume the MC will win using some black spikes against many demons and will grow stronger. The complete useless damage stats will fly by, the character stats will increases and he will unlock an arbitrary but useful new skill via a tree and method that doesn't matter. Every combat chapter is essentially a filler chapter and falls flat.
There's a few other little niggles like the irrational reporter character who somehow hasn't been arrested and simply doesn't fit into the setting of the story. (She's literally trying to expose a demon hunter to the demons) The chapter lengths feel like they're shrinking and they're already short and occasionally 1/3rd filled with Patreon stuff. So the sales pitch is a bit strong with this one and the word count stat is a bit off.
This is a story that I wanted to like, but at nearly every turn rubbed me the wrong way. I wish the author the best and hope others enjoy the story more than I did, but I'm out.
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I like the direction and speed of the actual plot, but when it comes to the characters. It's a modern day fantasy world and the world shares the same universe as another novel by the same author (which is in my to be read list)
But I feel like their bodily descriptions are like test dummies. Hell the only thing I know about the MC is that he is either skinny with brown hair average face or swimmer buff with with blue hair and pretty face. That's not much to go off of.
Example I met my neighbor who is a elf wearing a dress.... their is no bodily description shoot she could even be a dark elf or a light skinned elf with a huge rack, blonde hair that's long enough to reach her knees oh she's also only 5 ft etc etc or
I the MC am a dark skinned African man, skin almost black as oil, with a small afro. Skinny but still have muscle and your average height and weight. You could say I'm your average dark skinned male etc etc.
The MC could use the basic type of description cause the MC is more of a vehicle but the world and side characters should be detailed before they have actual plot involved or just give us a actual picture.
Love the story so far but my mind has to fill in the MAJOR gaps on what the characters looks like and the world.
Other then my guess of a modern world there's nothing to go off. It could be a fantasy world with modern or just a "normal" modern world. Shoot they could have trains powered by magic cause its the fantasy based instead of scientific based.
Its crazy Im saying this (I have read a lot of "curltured" novels) I need more character and world development for my "plot scenes".
Now I might have missed some paragraphs of character bodily description. If I did I'll reread and alter rating.
But at this time it's bugging me so much that the author didn't offer any world building or any description for the characters other then the most basic information of name gender and race.
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Hahhhh That was a good binge. Not the best story but still a fun one. Except the ero scenes, they're the best. Then I'll keep this short by saying what I think the overalll worst parts are.
-Power dynamics is just clunky. It seems that only a few select number of people is fighting for world peace, and humans are not included in that. It just feels weird to have the power concentrated on just a few characters.
-Organizations doesn't look real. They don't look organized at all. They need to be more imposing than this. Their collective power should seem to be able to affect the story and not just be there as backgrounds of characters.
-No division of plot. At this point it'll need a 1k chs to wrap this up and it'll be just one loong arc. At this point point there should be multiple conclusions but there's not. All the major things that happened at the start are still ongoing.
-At the end, it seems like there's too much info withheld from the readers. There should be info-dumps at the beginning to create a solid outline of everything before reaching this kind of tension.
I don't know but it seems most of these things are parts of the settimg. This may be weird but I think the author should consume more shounen anime/manga stuff. Like their setting, plot progression, organization, conflict, etc. Taking inspirations from them will probably make the novel more believable and concrete.
Disclaimer: No hate, only love. I still like this that's why I gave this a 4. And I only read things and haven't wrote a single page of a novel so this might came straight out of my ass.
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Amazing book a even amount of smut and development this is one I am gonna stick to the end with
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This is basically a “smut + plot” as I've seen other people referring to the smut novels on this site. You can tell the smut is the central aspect of the novel, though the plot development is enticing enough to make you want to keep reading chapter after chapter.
Our protagonist is a hard-working young man that cares for his sister, though Lady Luck hasn't really favored him throughout his life. During a job interview, he's assaulted by demons, and saved by a mysterious succubus that grants him, what I personally call, “the horny system, ” and now he has to f**k women to survive.
Surprisingly, for a smut + plot, the main character has some depth to his personality – he's not so unbelievably dumb (though he's conveniently obtuse on occasion), and he's not that much of a pushover, especially in the +18 scenes.
Moreover, he at least has some degree of character development, going from being terrified due to suddenly becoming a demon, then struggling to merge his newfound identity with his former self, to deciding to use his power to protect those he cares about (mostly the ones he has s*x with). The other characters, however, are mostly one-dimensional with the exception of his sister. On the other hand, the short length of the chapters doesn't really allow for much character development. We'll have to see.
The s*x scenes are good. Clearly, the author has no qualms about incest or kinky tentacle play, among other things. They're definitely boner-worthy, but I wouldn't say they're at the level of making my balls explode in agonizing pleasure, partly due to what I'll explain now – probably my main problem with this fiction.
The grammar and writing style. Now, it's abundantly clear to me that the author is not a native speaker of English. More than misspelled words (of which there aren't any as far as I remember), it's the use of the wrong tenses and the awkward phrasing of some lines. Additionally, the author's writing style is somewhat plain and uninspired. I think that I'm very picky when it comes to grammar in novels, and I was about to just drop it 10 chapters in, but then I started to notice that it got progressively better as I kept on reading. I mean, sure there are still a lot of the aforementioned misuses of tenses and awkward phrasing, and it could certainly use an editor, but seeing the author's determination to keep getting better at writing, and how much I started to like this novel, I can let them slide without bothering me that much. They're not really a deal-breaker to me, though it might be for you, especially if you are a native speaker.
I genuinely think that the author is onto something special right here. Granted, they might not be the most verbose and eloquent writer I've seen, but for some reason, I'm oddly attracted to the characters, the plot, and the world of this serial.
TL;DR: mainly a smut, I like the plot and characters, but the grammar mistakes and rather mundane writing style might be a turn-off for some readers.
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The story has been fantastic so far. I ended up subscribing on Patreon for the sole purpose of encouraging the author to continue writing. Honestly, it deserves an anime adaptation.
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My friend told me about this story. I thought it sounded alright so I tried it. I got hooked instantly. Personally I find the storytelling absolutely amazing. Emma is a waifu. But can we talk about naming 2 sisters diamond and pearl. Sounds like the title of a certain gen 5 Pokémon game. Anyway like the story
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