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The World-ruling Dungeon
The World-ruling Dungeon
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"Let me check real quick if I got what you said... Not only I'll be stuck forever in a fucking cave because I'll become immortal, I won't have any contact with humans and if someone hits me hard enough I die for good? Are you fucking mental?"
"Nah, that's pretty much it, good luck. See you again when you die."
"You fucking assh-.."

Yelp. Now I'm stuck in this dungeon forever, what the heck is there to do here?

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ActionAdultFantasyHaremIsekaiLitRPGSmut
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Aggressive Characters Animal Characteristics Anti-social Protagonist Antihero Protagonist Appearance Different from Actual Age Army Building Arrogant Characters Beastkin Boss-Subordinate Relationship Character Growth Cruel Characters Dishonest Protagonist Distrustful Protagonist Dungeon Master Dungeons Elemental Magic Fantasy World Hard-Working Protagonist Hot-blooded Protagonist Mind Break Multiple POV Sexual Cultivation Technique System Administrator Weak to Strong World Invasion
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      doltramir
      Status: ch 43 – a secret pathway

      It started really nice, but then more and more things were introduced and now it just absolutely boring. Chapters are not that big and completely filled with unneeded dialogues. I forgot how long ago mercenaries entered the cave and how long ago MC started to kill them. It is like one interesting event for 3-4 chapters at best. And there are at least 3 groups of mercenaries, two groups of goblins and only one group of MC's pov. And they constantly switchin. Sometimes 2-4 times a chapter. And what's left is a dialogue "dude, I don't wanna go in that cave. Maybe we shouldn't?" But it takes about 20-30 lines. Wtf? There is just no space left for something interesting.

      15 lines of MC's dialogue per 3-4 chapter? That's just awful. And MC sometimes does really dumb things just for the sake of it being dumb. That really irritates. It is bad enough because of how there is everything and so nothing, and then there is this. Author tries to write several plot lines at once and in the end writes nothing in particular. Haaaaaah...

      You should've just written all of this from MC's pov. Maybe also mercs's if you want to show how MC crushed them from first person. And occasional pov for his girls. And that's it. 10-20 chaps MC's pov, 1-2 of another. Then it would've been interesting.

      For now it feels the same as if you get some ingredients for your tea, pancakes and ice cream; some meat, potato, some noodles, tomatoes and even chocolate, and then mixed them together, boiled and dumped on a plate to eat. Little part of everything and it tastes like sh*t, when you could've make every thing separately and it would've been awesome.

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      EthanPeh
      Status: ch 57 – a new start

      I love this. It was slightly confusing with the random numerous POVS but eventually it came together quite well. 

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