Since the cuck author whatsawhizzer likes to live in his own little bubble and deleted almost everything what criticizes his trash fire, I will post here my review which he deleted on his own website.

Author really into traps now. I mean I get that the rumours about him are true of him shoving NTR in almost all of your stories. Thats his kink and trait, but it seems once he will come back and write on this again, he will also add traps/futa into his stories since this was his big brain idee of a prequal lol. Thank god I dropped Men of the House before it turned into a similar sh*t show.I enjoyed The Coitus Exchange, tho its f**king very short, and Netori Master, also here... just a single chapter. Hence I thought despite his bad reputation I would give this novel a chance since he seems to "enjoy" Harem stories too... according to your subscribestar at least but this is just him lying.

I wish I could have read the comments there before (his website), even tho he delete almsost ALL of them which criticize him... I wish I checked the comments on other sites like this which would saved my wasted time on another NTR infused crap. I dont mind bait. TBH if its ONLY bait for drama I dont mind but he simple cant help himself to make the baits into real NTR.

I mean for real, he had a BIG banger here of a start, THIS good... and then he f**ked THIS up alone with Volume 2... then he add MORE BS with magic, ONLY for more NTR... volume after volume... only to retcon the story TWICE because he wanted to appease some people in indonesia for their NTR fetish ? I get people want to get paid for their money, but if he want NTR, he should make a NTR focused story, which you seems to enjoy creating it. But dont mix it up as you did here. You saw how fast and bad it turned out. At least he admitted yhe f**ked it up, but now he tries to deny it. I thought people are harsh with him since he made some mistakes in the past, but it seems he simply cant write Harem stories at all, and if he reach a roadblock he add NTR because his brain cant handle simple human behaviour. For him there is only black or white, one extrem or the other, but no grey, no something in between... But the author is the one lecturing the people about wanting a "wish fulfillment" in a Harem story... Like for real, this guy is so whack.

And then there was this comment of his... THAT comment of his... it just showed me he dont know what the people who was reading it really wanted in the first place, or for the better wording, NOT to do in the first place. He knows people enjoyed only volume 1, and he tried to find a way to create something similar one. And you know what he wants to do  ? He wants to create another trap-ish, futa-ish protag with a sh*tty personality which as you saw was on the same level bad and hated on as the cheap, crappy NTR baits he did, which of course turned into real NTR because whatsawhizzer is not  whatsawhizzer without having his cuck content shoved it just because lol. But also it will play it in the same universe as this on ? Really ? Where people know what will happen once MC2 dies, MC1 gets reborn into this one and what we saw in this story will be cannon ?Im glad I waited before purchising the bonus chaps of Man of the House or Kindred Paradise.I hope he WILL work on this dumpster fire so people will understand what his real fetish are and treat him like that. I hope he will never make a rework or "zero" version of it since he dont deserve it. I hope like NTR crush, this will be also be equated on the famous whizzerthemegacuck in the smut LN community for decades.

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This story just isn't for me. That isn't to say that it's not good, though! Believe me, the characters are amazing. The discriptions are outstanding! However, the story contains a bit too much darkness in it for me to handle. Sure, I can handle a bit of darkness, but this isn't a "little" darkness. It's an astronomical amount of darkness! At least, in volume 2....

I am not a sadist and do not enjoy the MC getting hurt, nor do I like betrayals. The story has no betrayals that are "complete betrayals", but it is on the bordering line. Everytime I read a page, I felt this uneasy feeling in my heart. It was as if I knew something bad was gonna happen. I tried to put up with the feeling for as long as I could. I knew that if I let it take over, I was going to drop the series. 

At volume 2, everything came pouring out. I have dropped the series, but I will never forget it. This is a work of art, but not one that I completely like. Believe me, it's much better than how I write my stories. I am going to sever my ties with this series and felt like I needed to write a review. I feel my heart painfully tightening knowing that I won't ever know how this story ends. An amazing work of art, this series was.

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I really hate this story, MC who is really stupid and doesn't consider the consequences in the future.

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Author is shooting for his version of PLxIC and failing miserably. Incredibly inconsistent personalities, jarringly unfunny comedy, and a plot that gets swampy with no drain in sight. 

s*x scenes are decent, but you will get tired quickly. Sorry but this one was just not for me. 

Premise and beginning was interesting, yet it doesn’t seem to be worth continuing.

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This story has a pretty interesting premise but early on it really begins to become too drama filled. It feels like one of those soaps that you'd watch on cable with a twist every episode to up the drama. That's what has begun to happen. 

Also, the MC of this story must legitimate have some sort of mental disorder that is causing him to act so f**king stupid that you probably can't believe it. Throughout the story, you see him try to think like the supposed 35 year old he should be yet he constantly acts without thinking of the consequences, makes horrible choices, and makes the excuse of "it's my hormones. It's my teenage body." Hormones don't work like that you f**k. They don't regress your mind to a mentally deficient 5 year old. I swear it's like this 35 year old who had a wife and slept with prostitutes has just discovered what a penis is and how to use it. The last straw was when his sister decided to move out cus of all this sh*t (even the characters are done dealing with his sh*t) and he says that he'll get her back by showing how good a man he is all confidently. After a year of doing nothing to improve himself, not thinking of consequences to what he does, attempting to solve everything by putting his d*ck in the nearest hole, and blaming everything on his mom for coddling him and his hormone for controlling him instead of his own stupid choices. Yep. Definitely better than anyone else and a great future for her to be with him.

I had to drop at this point because with all the resources he can have, he does nothing to improve himself despite being raped multiple times. He constantly makes horrible decisions with his d*ck and then blames it on his "hormones". When something serious is going on, instead of figuring it out, he whips his d*ck out. 

The story started out good but honestly the tone is all over the place with serious moments, smut, and some comedic events happening in quick succession and out of place. This added with the horrible MC make for a story that started good, but ended up a clusterf**k.

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sh*tty MC, only thinks with his d*ck 

Dark stuff which isn't my cup of tea 

I just liked the few 1st chaps with his mother, I only stafted bcz of d incest tag, but it was honestly a waste of my time

If the author writes something light, nice n fluffy (with incest oc n not sh*tty n horny MC) I would certainly read it

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There is a lot that is good with the story. The writing is entertaining, there is some great world-building as it progresses, and the characters are all fairly distinct with their own unique personalities. Volume 1 is an enjoyable start with a twist at the end, and volume 2 really amps up the stakes with a tragic ending.

What really lets this story down is volume 3. I won't go too deep into spoilers, but the MC transfers bodies into a prince and meets one of the girls who loves his normal self. Then instead of telling her who he is and what happened he proceeds to basically rape her, leaving her feeling as if she has betrayed the person she loves. Even then he doesn't tell her. All the MC needed to do was tell her his name and prove it by relaying some of his memories (like the very unique way they met). Instead he violates her and leaves her emotionally destroyed.

This just killed my enjoyment of the story, and is the number one reason so many people have negative views and reviews of it. The backlash was so big that the author postponed writing volume 4 for a while on his website and it was several more years before going on to the fifth volume. 

Volume 4 is an improvement but not by much. It becomes more of a mystery/man-on-the-run type of story, where pretty much everybody he encounters is an enemy. It's so formulaic that it becomes boring, and what should be plot twists are straight paths. Unfortunately the author is also very thin-skinned and, instead of taking any negative feedback into consideration or engaging in constructive dialogue, he reacts to any negative reviews on his website by either lashing out at the poster or outright deleting them. Even he knew he screwed up on volume 3 and alluded as such several times, but he is unable to take any critique without attacking the users.

TLDR: Volumes 1 and 2 are great, volume 3 was a piece of garbage, and volume 4 just felt like the author going through the motions because he had to, not because he wanted to. This is how great  and promising stories self-destruct.

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1/5 for enjoyment

3/5 for smut

MC is 0iq dumb as sh*t and there's no reason at all for this to be an isekai. He's supposed to be a 35 year old in a 12 year old body but has the brain power of a 10 year old.

If you enjoy stereotypical American melodramatic romance TV shows, you'll eat this series up.

It's a frustrating read, and you'll leave more s*xually frustrated than gratified.

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This was an interesting harem story. Volume one of the novel was pretty good, but volume 2 is a different story. Most of the volume was pretty entertaining until I got near the end. I feel like near the end of the volume the tone just dramatically changed compared to the tones in volume 1 and in the beginning of volume 2.

In conclusion this harem story is dark and I enjoyed the beginning. 

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If you came looking for a comedic harem as a harem seeking reincarnator traverses a world where women outnumber men 1000 to 1 or a story of absolute smut, leave, the first 10 or so chapters gave me a wrong opinion on this novel and my expectations were overturned gloriously. The story does not pull punches and shows just how bad a such a world can become.

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