If this were another fiction I would feel uncomfortable reviewing it at such an early time, but, this story is an exception!______________________________________________________________________

Grammar 5/5: The story doesn't have any grammatical mistakes. I tried reading it thoroughly trying to find a mistake, but I couldn't. It's the type of creation that was bestowed upon us by the indie gods. There are zero, you heard me right, zero, spelling errors.10, 000 yen to anyone that can prove me wrong. Text inconsistencies? zero. Like I said this is one of the best fan-fics you can read in ya life.

Story 4.5/5: It's too early to see if this story goes sour, but I don't see it going downhill from here. It has a very solid beginning. With the MC being a chef, the author is letting you know that her being a chef is going to come into play. And if the author is reading this I really want to say don't just explain things that most people who are not familiar with the one-piece fandom will not get. Don't fall into a hole that movies like world of warcraft fell into. 

Characters 4.5/5: MC is relatable she makes decisions that we in real life would do. There is no I won't take the easy way cause where is the challenge" bullsh*t. There is no, "I want to be a hero and have morals and sh*t." No, the main character is all about surviving. And the author shows this when we encounter ??, and I expect the author to add more of a real-life personality and not fall into the hole of iseaki tropes.

Style 3.5/5: It's the style you see in satire fictions but for some reason, it doesn't feel like satire at all. It has a constant balance of satire that gives the viewers the comedy and the other half with the story and action that envelops you, making you hooked on the story. Let's just hope they can keep that balance. Also, I have yet to see the action scenes but judging by the fiction place right now, I have high hopes.

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It's a big treat for fans of the one-piece series, and also a good treat for non-fans.

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Uniqueness: +10 points

No sh*tty grammar: +10 points

No NTR: +10 points

yep, 5 stars it is!

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How marvelous the story is the writing so close to perfection

My body is shivering from the excitement.

The way the author orchestrate the story *chef's kiss*

5/5 for me I will read it how many times until it makes me bored.😍🥰😘

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I love this fanfic, there are no grammatical mistakes, it's just words I bet it was the typo doing it, anyway yeah I love this fanfic and I, even more, fell in love when the author posted the lemon stuff ughh so steamy 

ps- English is not my first language so yeah yeah if there are wrong words or grammatically mistakes just don't mind it, okay peace ✌️

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