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The story is a bit of a slog. 100k words written, very little said. Extremely inefficient storytelling, which is par for the course with webnovels. Ultimately, if you've read dungeon core novels, you'll find some decent ideas that just aren't ever executed. Nothings happened, and I don't know if it ever will. Most of the story feels like filler, and it could be said with a lot less words.
The M.C. Is hard to relate to. She has anxiety and depression, but with 100k words hasn't experienced any personal growth. Or decline. She's exactly the same as when the story started.
The beginning is an info dump. Gives a bunch of tables and stats that aren't pertinent or relevant. And that's the story in a nutshell. It can't even be called a slice of life story because the pace is literally glacier. 5 days passed. No life has happened XD.
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Promising story it brings fresh elements to the Dungeon Corte/Master genre. 9/10 Would be 10/10 if the MC would show more sins of mental improvement.
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