I was a common shlub. With a boring routine of going to work, coming back. masturbating and going back to sleep. After the tenth anniversary of doing the same thing, With no other form of entertainments. I was suddenly beset with intense bad luck. Cars trying to run me over, Wild animals running after me on the street, Stray bullets from a terrorist attack. What finally got me was tripping on a pebble. Hitting my head with on the wall and falling face first on a puddle. After a few second a meteor landed right on me and the building exploded right next to me from a gas leak.
I'd rate it a 2.5 stars, but my opinion will be biased. The title says it all. If you read, you'll get a world with hentai logic. And that's not bad, if the story is written well.
While the story hasn't had much progress up to where I've read- since it was only chapter 4- you can infer that the way the plotlines are presented probably won't be too engaging for an audience looking for world building outside of fantasy races to make love with. The pacing of the story is extemely fast and the characters introduced receive barely any characterization, nor do we see the protag putting in any effort into being good with his talents. All of that has been off-screen and in time skips, in so far as chapter 4. Of course, considering the nature of the story, love interests will probably recieve more characterization compared to those in the initial setting.
Syntax could use some work- a lot of sentences lack proper punctuation, but spelling doesn't seem to be a problem. Truth be told, I haven't gotten to a s*x scene, so I can't tell you whether the smut is good enough to ignore the rest of the story elements.
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Chapter 3 -
s*x is absolutely everything. Just had a great meal, Spend the rest of the day in passionate lovemaking with the cook. Had a festival, have a mass orgy and thats for EVERY festival. Found a coin on the road. Spend the rest of the day jerking it on that spot.
If you look directly into the full moon. You have to have s*x 3 times with different people otherwise. You will be cursed. Or some dumb sh*t like that.
On that note, My brothers f**king hate my guts. Opposite of that my sisters want to have s*x with me All the time.
But again this is a hentai world.
Chapter 10 - I haven't touched the girls yet, because I don't want to be known as a s*x crazed maniac.
After comparing these 2 chapters I come to the question, where the hell is the logic?
The story is poorly written, the characters, including the MC, have no development, the background of the world is not in-depth and what is shown is simply pitiful and contradictory, situations are only played on the screen from time skips after time skips.
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