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Let's start this review off by saying: This is an absolutely sickly sweet fluffy thing that will make you squirm in delight while your teeth ache.
Wordweaving:
The grammar and spelling are excellent, I think I can count on one hand the number of mistakes I've seen, which are again lost in the sweetness of this story. The flow is very smooth as well, and you get sucked into the story very easily, wanting more even as you read.
Characters:
Please remember that this story is pretty short, but even for such a length the Author has managed to show us some unique (even if they're templates, but that's totally okay for this kind of Otome setting) characters, with our MC being the most developed one of course, you will see her change and fret and grow, closely followed by our little Emma, whose growth we get to witness through Fran's eyes, it's adorable. And the Author still managed to breathe in life to the side cast, brief as their appearances were, they still felt like real people. Do keep in mind tho that none of these characters are perfect, they all have faults, especially our MC, but that only makes them and her feel more real.
World:
The Author somehow managed to depict a pretty interesting world despite how short the story is, giving a very nice base for any possible further use of the Universe. And how the MC came to be is also pretty unique, I mean I've read a few novels with the MC being a in-game character that came to their senses, but this one was has a unique twist as to how it happens.
Story:
What to say that I haven't already gushed about... it's absolutely adorable, a bit of anxiety, but it's mostly just fun watching Fran fret over everything, going all tsun at times, while stumbling through other situations X3
Summary:
If you want a break from the action and drama and high strung stories, and just want to sit back and have a nice, sweet, savory treat, this story is for you, I highly recommend it.
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Honestly one of the most adorable novels on this site. The ending made me cry.
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This was absolutely adorable I'm loving it. Give it a try, you won't regret.
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I normally don't leave reviews but this was well-made and the story I great. I can only hope for more stories like this. Thank ya, author, for making this!
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