An incredibly interesting concept, Held back by the less than stellar grammar and large lack of story. I don't read much on this site, however I haven't seen the meshing of two fandoms like this. I Don't usually read things like this, but I was intruiged.
Final Opinion
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As said above, Its a really interesting concept. Meshing two fandoms like this is something I don't usually read nor see. However, The way its written is strange. Lots of time skips, relatively bad grammar, and a story that doesn't really exist. As the author said though, English is not their first language. Would I recomend reading it? Sure, Knock yourself out. However, dont go in expecting incredible things.
what is this unholy combination of Undertale and Solo Leveling????
the titles of the chapters alone should indicate the quality of this, but I have a sense of morbid curiosity and decided to read it anyways...
verdict:
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definitely not the best thing iv ever seen... would have perhaps been an interesting story if there was a story...
yeah hate to disappoint but there just isn't a story here, time skips and unexplained plot holes all over the place that the author even explained in the comment section when asked about it. there are easily at least 10 more chapters of content that could be written instead of the 5 month time skip. and so far we have just been somewhat (?) introduced to the character quirks and powers we will be watching going around doing things as the OP characters they are. (as of chapter 7)
id describe it as a classic case of "self-insert fanfic" that somehow got to the weekly trending page
A high school girl who was a chuuni dead by a truck because saving a kid who god deemed as an important figure in the future. The god then grants her a wish due to her heroic act of saving the so called important figure. And that wish is…
(DB) A ‘normal’ teenager was watching Mumei, until an ad popped on his screen, now trying to get rid of the ad ask ”Want to have an adventure?”
(A/N: Doing for fun, And this one turned one of my favorites to work on,
An incredibly interesting concept, Held back by the less than stellar grammar and large lack of story. I don't read much on this site, however I haven't seen the meshing of two fandoms like this. I Don't usually read things like this, but I was intruiged.
Final Opinion
As said above, Its a really interesting concept. Meshing two fandoms like this is something I don't usually read nor see. However, The way its written is strange. Lots of time skips, relatively bad grammar, and a story that doesn't really exist. As the author said though, English is not their first language. Would I recomend reading it? Sure, Knock yourself out. However, dont go in expecting incredible things.
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what is this unholy combination of Undertale and Solo Leveling????
the titles of the chapters alone should indicate the quality of this, but I have a sense of morbid curiosity and decided to read it anyways...
verdict:
definitely not the best thing iv ever seen... would have perhaps been an interesting story if there was a story...
yeah hate to disappoint but there just isn't a story here, time skips and unexplained plot holes all over the place that the author even explained in the comment section when asked about it. there are easily at least 10 more chapters of content that could be written instead of the 5 month time skip. and so far we have just been somewhat (?) introduced to the character quirks and powers we will be watching going around doing things as the OP characters they are. (as of chapter 7)
id describe it as a classic case of "self-insert fanfic" that somehow got to the weekly trending page
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