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Okay, what in the world did I just read?
I'm going to leave this here, not because I've read the story and found myself disliking it. Rather, this is basically just my recommendation to the author to PLEASE write a better synopsis that might actually make someone outside of a very specific brand of degenerate political extremists want to read your work. As this synopsis currently stands, it basically functions as reader-repellent. Some general tips:
Alright, I think that should do. You don't have to read this if you don't want to, but I'm giving this advice in good faith. Good luck and I hope your story does well!
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Another piece of Western propaganda that tries to spread out of Twitter and disguise itself as a story (and failed miserably).
I DO NOT MIND tolerating other peoples belief, but that changes once the twat tries to infect other peoples with their brain rot ideology.
Seriously, keep your mindset to yourself, it's disgraceful as a creature that stood above the food chain.
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A story embodying political correctness, trying to bring to life the ultra-Manichean, simplistic and bigoted vision of fashionable militant movements. On the one hand, we have the friendly space pirates rebelling against society, composed of the transgender heroine and poor little discriminated non-humans serving as reflections for all minorities, on the other the cartoonish evil Christian fundamentalists of the future already seen in 345, 784 other science fiction stories. And of course nothing in between, because as the summary says, humans are incapable of tolerance because their brains are too small for it (replace "human" with "heteros*xual privileged white male" if you didn't understand the metaphor not at all subtle).
I wanted to give this story a chance, but I stopped at chapter 9, when there was a whole drama because the heroine talked about bat meat in front of a bat anthro, which gave lead to several paragraphs of autophlagelation on the theme of microaggressions.
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Yeah I'm all for p*rn smut or erotica
Hell with plot it's fun and more enjoyable than without sometimes
But this is just too much
It's absurd it's like looking at all the weirdest parts of the furry and other fandoms condensed into a story while at the same time trying to dress up in a actual story suit
Like a roleplay on a chat site at this point
My mains peeves and I only read like 3 chapters is
Captain uwu really I can't stop laughing to actually read my stomach hurts
If it's satire amazing job I love it if not please give him a name not a meme
s*x scene meh not the worst not the best for someone starting out ima give it a solid 7
Also politically from the synopsis alone it's basically going like omg people are bad look how stupid their decisions are
Which ya know valid slavery is wrong but the way you say it is just
Internet meme woke style writ wrong
Honestly this story is basically good ideas taken and then written through a very weird style you usually see memes of from people looking in to the weirder sides of the furry communities
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