"You may see my sleeping form, but you never see the needle that prick me. You may smell my tobacco, but you never smell the missing cat that bit me. You may have seen my show, but I'm no longer a puppet for the MC! Can't you see?...
I'm Kogoro Mouri!
I'll sleep for myself."
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A man of culture was reborn as Kogoro Mouri. Could he survive the crime-ridden world, and become the best detective in the world? Read to find out!
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MC takes over as a detective and gets a system, decide the first thing to do is insult said system by changing its name to 'baa-chan', making it a constantly toxic relationship whith his system.... Not a great start as MC seems to be an even worse and whinier version of Mouri and is only looking for having a good time with women aaaaand a bitchy system is something I have never seen actually work. Let's see if the MC's actions and story can redeem that.
So MC is learns he has to actually work in order to solve cases, so he tries to takes his work seriously by giving the truth first, to bad he does it only because the system rewards him for that..... then he decide to cover for the possible murder his client did to her husband, promising that "everything is going to be ok", kissing her and going to the scene crime with her (not liking the direction things take). When they arrive, they discover the corpse moved so while he lost quite a bit of blood, they are happy to realize the husband is still alive.... things are already pretty bad when it comes to the MC's decision making and priorities but that's when things really become the worst.
MC decides to use his system reward to change the husband's memories of being almost murdered by his wife, nothing said about the husband possibly still losing blood, no details at all actually as to how it happened, the wife just decided to kill her husband because he pissed her of. And when talks about bringing him to the hospital are given, MC decide to bang the wife right next to the crime scene instead, while preparing to lie to the police about what happened. After one last "Get pregnant with my baby!" from the MC, I believe this hell is finally over, then they decide to f*ck in the shower one more time.
I had to stop reading 'cause the MC was starting to lust for his daughter.... not for the first time.
In short : MC just wants to bang and do not care about the story he was put in. Will go for any woman he likes NO MATTER who they are and what they did, so murderers and psychos are ok of course. More about his terrible personality is the fact he created by himself a bad relationship with his system and never felt bad about it. Finally MC will give priority to s*x over crime solving, will lie to the police and will constantly question why not go for his daughter.
I have no idea why some people would call this a good story. There are a few things you can keep, but most of all of the MC's decision and story are at most illogical. And that's in less than 10 chapters read.
Obviously not recommended to anybody other than those that really like Mouri and really want cheap smut of him.
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The rating is not a lie. It's just that good. I honestly never expected this quality from a fanfic. Keep up the good work, author~
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