It's not bad better than most atleast has correct grammar and you can understand whats written the only reason I gave 3 stars is because main character is an edgy kid with no real reason other than to muh heroez bad
Or heroes can become bad which is a strange argument considering he is a villain and a mass murderer at that
If you are going to make him evil just give him a decent enough reason
A Villain Novel with a true Villain... kinda.
I'll just list down the things that I observed about it.
- MC's kinda similar to Sam from Villain's Rising,
- World building still in its infancy, the potential is pretty good but can still be butchered,
- Plot has potential,
- The MC's gone too far into the dark side, can still be saved tho,
It's currently a good novel to pass the time, not too good nor too bad, but it has the potential to be.
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It's not bad better than most atleast has correct grammar and you can understand whats written the only reason I gave 3 stars is because main character is an edgy kid with no real reason other than to muh heroez bad
Or heroes can become bad which is a strange argument considering he is a villain and a mass murderer at that
If you are going to make him evil just give him a decent enough reason
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