Being rewritten as Paradise of Infinty on webn
Nik Faran, a son of the miserable harlot that lead a life of a miserable gigolo. His birth father is one of the top swordsmen that gave his mother the glory of entering his chamber now remained unknown.
Passing years allowed Nik to polish his skills as a prostitute before he was suddenly made aware of the rumour that was the mythical Incubus Society.
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Warning: This is my first novel ever and all the constructive criticism is accepted. Other rants will be royally ignored.
The novel is based for my ambition to make the biggest fictional harem. Therefore, lemon scenes are the focus.
It was at that moment that his life finally changed.
It started with a good pace and curious plot but it changed for worse. The author leaves many typos in a LOT of chapters and even if the readers point it out he doesn't care to correct the mistakes. There are many inconsistencies in the plot and power system and it gets way worse when he has the brilliant idea to mix Demon Slayer, JoJo's and High School of the Dead when he already had a lot of problems writing about the Avatar world. The main harem is boring and uninteresting and he is a master in making interesting characters lose their personality, the HOFTD girls are an empty shell, the same for a handful of other characters.
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A good novel with good plot (despite the name makes it seem like there is none), in fact this novel has a better plot than most of the others.
I advise everyone to give it a try, this is a fun read.
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Well so far so good (especially the s*x scene) if you are a man of culture you might try reading this ???
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Probably should've given him a real backstory, instead of just saying what happened in a single paragraph you should dedicate a chapter to his previous life. I don't give a sh*t about 'growth' if I don't see a reason for him to grow. There wasn't even thought put into the decision, he did it on a whim and that's it. And I am disappointed in such a sh*tty character design for Incubus dude, I mean he gives a sh*t reason and then insulted him and he's like "Ok" and that was it.
Disappointing, read Profane Prince of Domination or something like that, cause I know you aren't here for p*rn itself because this has what seems like 0 plot and not good enough s*x scenes.
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Honestly? This novel has some really good writing and characterization. The author takes their time giving each Harem member a personality. Though, it does get hard to keep track of who is who, but that's a common issue in multi world harems.
Anyways, it has good s*x scenes, and deserves to be called a masterpiece just because of Nik.
With that, I implore you to give this novel a try, even if harem novels aren't your thing.
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The rewrite is better grammar wise but fairly different for anyone wondering first off it is a different story all together but I love this one a bit more IMO but it gets stiff with the grammar feeling like a portly dubbed Chinese Wuxia movie at times otherwise a solid 4/5 IMO the smut is nice despite the grammar and the plot is done well enough it feels good to read currently in the Avatar arc in the desert library (not a spoiler since it's the chapter name) and so far enjoying it gonna finish this out then read the rewrite as it seems more coherent grammar wise with the couple chapters I've read so far and it's different enough it feels like a different story with similar characters all together don't know feel like Nik is more docile in the rewrite but we will see
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so many different kinds of fetish, only true man of culture can understand this masterpiece novel
MC cross over many different anime worlds. This novel is like "s*xual" version of chinese novel "Reincarnation Paradise"
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