By SurfAngel_1031
Vivienne, a vampire of immeasurable power has quietly survived alone for millennia. Her boring un-life as a surgeon comes to an accidental end where she finds friendship, then walks headlong into true love. Vivienne soon discovers that the past n
First of all the one I want to point out is the large amount of text of dialogue that can feel a bit to unnecessary is evident in the later chapter. The ending was great even though I was starting to get ticked off by some chapters before the end..
The plot is good, a little bit contrived at times, but the characters are good enough to overlook that. Maybe at some points it felt like it was dragging on, but just pull through and you'll hopefully be satisfied at the end
Also, maybe do more chapters instead long chapters, because of observations that I stated in the first paragraph. You can ignore that advice if you don't want to do that...
All my other thoughts are ln the last chapter...
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