As a pure Ascended, Primrose has vast amounts of knowledge and combat experience and the mental age of an adult, but like most newborn Ascended, because of her childish body and growth hormones, she tends to act like a child.

However, her innate personality is that of a selfish and greedy individual, seeking to profit to the best of her ability from any given situation. Even as a Zealot, although she seeks to please her Lord and serve him to the best of her ability, she also craves power. It is not only to serve her lord better, but to also cement her position, and perhaps monopolize him.

Appearance: Like all Ascended, she is a very beautiful girl, having flawless healthy skin, straight greenish-platinum hair, piercing golden eyes, and a round black gem embedded to her forehead. Of course, she is originally born in the body of a 6-year-old, but her appearance matures 12 times faster, until reaching the bodily age of 18.

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Some sad sack of SHIT copy-pasted my novel and put it on amazonNov 5, 2023
Chapter 66 – Two Months. Creating Divine Relics.Oct 21, 2023
Chapter 65 – Purpose. Tempering Willpower Through Pain.Oct 10, 2023
Chapter 64 – Ascended World 2Oct 8, 2023
Chapter 63.5 – An Eye for an EyeOct 4, 2023
Chapter 63 – Increase Compatibility 3. Sun’s Advent’s Allegiance.Oct 4, 2023
Chapter 62 – An affinity straight out of an eldritch god’s deepest nightmareOct 1, 2023
Chapter 61 – (Title at the end)Sep 30, 2023
Chapter 60.5 – The Human Surrender(The Timeskip Summary)Sep 29, 2023
Timeskip or not, that is the questionSep 29, 2023
Chapter 60 – World Domination at handSep 29, 2023
Adding an alternate story – Ryan’s alternate future.Sep 20, 2023
Chapter 59 – Cards on the table. Where is the candidate?Sep 13, 2023
3-week hiatus – VacationAug 30, 2023
Chapter 58.5 – The escaped candidateAug 30, 2023

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dijkstra

Status: chapter 31 – a broken combination. parley.

Jul 4, 2023

This is okay. English is probably not the author's first language and the prose isn't the best. Where it does shine is the author's creativity. He continually surprises me with the things he comes up with. So yh, this is no great work of literature and it's pretty basic in most regards for what it is, but if you're into the tags it has then it might be something to read if you're free.

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Cheetachaser

Status: chapter 26 – saved by shoes

Jun 2, 2023

The pacing is very good, there is little to no wasted text, though some parts may feel slightly rushed it is almost unnoticeable when accompanied by the very harried MC's POV, and the hectic, almost non-stop action.

There are little to no typographical errors, syntax, grammar and spelling are all quite decent.

There is one very minor continuity error, which is irrelevant, and easily missed or forgotten. Which may not be an actual error.

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Skorno

Status: chapter 6 – guns, enhancements, and cowardly...

Apr 7, 2023

So far, im liking it, keep it going

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