So far It's very good, the personality of the protagonist is fantastic, the grammar is very good, I hardly found any mistakes, the story is well done, it's really surprising that a "newbie" can do something so good, I hope that let it stay like this until the end.

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Its good so far. Its still a bit early, however so far, the character interactions have been good, and not as though Author is teetering on the edge of what can and cant be done to keep the story as 'normal (As in Canon events) ' as possible, which has the story flowing pretty smoothly along in a new direction that I'm rooting for. 

Fingers crossed it doesn't end up like the many of fate fics where things rapidly snowball once alliances are made since there isn't a ton of things to build off of.

 If you're a fan of the fate series would definitely recommend. Only regret is finding it while the chapters are so few : ( 

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5 stars just for the sass from the MC. It's always fun to see him mess around with everyone else.

Edit: reduced to 4* because the MC is too OP, which makes it a bit boring.

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The story is one of the best Fate fanfics I have read, up there with FATE/Defiance (reincarnated as Icarus) and I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice (reincarnated as Shirou before the 4th Grail War), the only problem is that the MC is too strong for the cast of Stay Night, his power level seems like it would fit better in Grand Order, technically speaking he is not too strong to be Servant in FATE, but a bit too much for Shirou to deal with 

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It's really good so far minor lore mistakes like Sasaki getting the homeland boost but since he's not actually Sasaki Kojiro but just some random farmer he wasn't receiving the boost but those don't really matter. But other than that the author has great knowledge on fate lore and it's really well written. Only complaint is that Aston feels a little too OP every fight feels like there's no risk that no matter what happens he would win.

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Around a 5, (Made at chapter 50)

So in my quest to widen my readings, throughout the year I started reading fanfictions, and I just decided to pick this one to read.  

And it has been a very fun read. Pretty simple on the fanfic side, just adding a powerful character into the world. The character himself, Aston, has been a pleasure to read, while he might be stronger than most characters in the story, it is done well. Cause while the fights have been good, they aren't the focus on the story. Learning about the past, moving on, and all that fun stuff.

The story itself is short, about 46 chapters. So overall a good read, short read, and yeah it was just a fun experience. 

The past of the round table is referenced quite frequently, but it's pretty must just Aston and Artoria, cause set in Fate/Stay time. Which is a good thing for the story, as not too many characters to focus on. But the development of the round table cast has been quiet good.

Also spoilers for certain events, and about the future of story, so please don't precede if you aren't interested in spoilers. 

Yeah overall though. Story good.

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