Rewrite is very rushed feels souless empty husk skiping every character development it can skiping world building skiping emotions. We are unable to really immers ourselfs in the story. We can't even feel like we can care about stuff that's happening. (Sometimes we can to enjoy everything but mostly rush and skip)

So my conclusion is that this is basically a draft that needs rewrite. Fondation is great but it needs to break down the buildings and build it back up stronger and better. 

I know for a fact Author is fully capable to deliver quality product but might have problems at how slowly it progresses for them when they try. 

So ya I would say this is rough diamond that needs some work done and it will be great story. 

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