[This is the rewritten version of The Story of a Girl and a Goddess Whose Souls Became Interconnected].
Upload Schedule - The hope is weekly, but due to recent events in my personal life, I can't promise anything.
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Plagued by amnesia, a girl wakes up on the outskirts of a mysterious forest. Haunted by a constant voice and searing pain, she takes comfort in the name given to her by the unseen speaker: Servi.
Determined to survive, she sneaks into a bustling city, clinging to the underside of a wagon to avoid detection. In the maze-like streets, she encounters beings with animalistic features that are both fascinating and confusing.
In the city's grim slums, Servi sees the brutal realities of a desperate world. Seeking shelter in an abandoned shack, her peace is broken by the cries of tormented siblings. Refusing to stay silent, Servi confronts their oppressors with only a humble pipe, an act of bravery that leads to her death.
But death doesn't claim her. Instead, she meets Itarr, a goddess trapped and shackled by forgotten memories. Their souls merge, bound by a shared purpose, and together they return to the living world.
As Servi and Itarr embark on their journey, they are driven to reclaim the goddess's lost memories. In a world full of mystery and pain, their quest for identity and purpose will test them, revealing secrets hidden within their intertwined fates.
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Content Warning: This story contains graphic depictions of gore, explicit sexual content, and strong language. Reader discretion is advised. Please be aware of the mature themes and provocative scenes present throughout the narrative because it can get quite dark.
What to Expect - Overall: Interconnected: Spliced Souls is about Servi, a girl without any memories, navigating through this new life of hers as a goddess with Itarr's power over the soul. Some chapters will have images, and some of those images are R-18. All images will be within a spoiler box. The beginning of such chapters will have an Author's Note explaining if the images are R-18 or not.
What to Expect - Romance: Servi is a futanari. She becomes one fairly early on in the story, and she will have multiple love interests-- polygamy-- as the story develops.
What to Expect - Tags: More tags will be added as the story develops so as to not spoil anything I have planned.
Rewrite is very rushed feels souless empty husk skiping every character development it can skiping world building skiping emotions. We are unable to really immers ourselfs in the story. We can't even feel like we can care about stuff that's happening. (Sometimes we can to enjoy everything but mostly rush and skip)
So my conclusion is that this is basically a draft that needs rewrite. Fondation is great but it needs to break down the buildings and build it back up stronger and better.
I know for a fact Author is fully capable to deliver quality product but might have problems at how slowly it progresses for them when they try.
So ya I would say this is rough diamond that needs some work done and it will be great story.
try out the first version but well I would say you should skip prologue and read the story from there then I want you to comeback and read this story (though that book has bad stuff to like arc 3 but over all it so much better as story cause it draws you in. Though it is really slow progressio so a lot of people would not bother but still at least try out first arc.
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