Reborn as a Kryptonian in the Dragon Ball universe, Hal is living his dream! Follow his adventures as he walks the path of power and rebuilds both the Kryptonian and Saiyan Empires. None can stand in his way as he grows to the limits of his multiverse and beyond!
This is an alternate take on my other Krypton Reborn, with a different MC than Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story. It takes place in the same greater outerverse as all my Krypton Reborn web novels and will be the fastest paced of the series (so far anyways lol!)
This story and all my other fanfictions are available for free on my Patreon, alongside my other web-novels. It will have a very loose upload schedule, as I am focusing my efforts on seven chapters of Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story per week. If this web novel gains enough support in my monthly Patreon polls, it may move to the top spot in the priority list!
Thanks to all the readers out there! All constructive criticism and comments are welcome!
- Chapter Twelve, Part TwoJan 12, 2024
- Chapter Twelve, Part OneJan 10, 2024
- Chapter Eleven, Part ThreeJan 8, 2024
- Chapter Eleven, Part TwoJan 5, 2024
- Chapter Eleven, Part OneJan 3, 2024
- Chapter Ten, Part ThreeJan 1, 2024
- Chapter Ten, Part TwoDec 29, 2023
- Chapter Ten, Part OneDec 27, 2023
- Chapter Nine, Part ThreeDec 25, 2023
- Chapter Nine, Part TwoDec 22, 2023
- Chapter Nine, Part OneDec 20, 2023
- Chapter Eight, Part ThreeDec 18, 2023
- Chapter Eight, Part TwoDec 17, 2023
- Chapter Eight, Part OneDec 17, 2023
- Chapter Seven, Part ThreeDec 16, 2023
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Hiatus - Updated Jan 12, 2024
Last updated 4 months ago
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- 23 plan to read
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- 9 dropped
The story is a wish fulfillment to the fullest. The story's pacing is fast and there isn't any type of struggles. Due to this there isn't any depth and nuance that makes the story engaging. It diminishes the sense of accomplishment that comes with the pivotal moments. The relationships between characters are lacking and shallow. Interactions between them is solely to benefit the MC like powering him up or providing him with essential items. The supporting characters feel like it exist solely to benefit the MC's journey. It feels like a checklist of power-ups and item acquisitions rather than a genuine exploration of characters and their relationships. The grammar is decent and allows the readers to navigate the story without distraction.
TLDR: The story feels more like a how-to guide to speedrunning Dragonball with a Kryptonian.
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