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Pages: | 198 |
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The story is a wish fulfillment to the fullest. The story's pacing is fast and there isn't any type of struggles. Due to this there isn't any depth and nuance that makes the story engaging. It diminishes the sense of accomplishment that comes with the pivotal moments. The relationships between characters are lacking and shallow. Interactions between them is solely to benefit the MC like powering him up or providing him with essential items. The supporting characters feel like it exist solely to benefit the MC's journey. It feels like a checklist of power-ups and item acquisitions rather than a genuine exploration of characters and their relationships. The grammar is decent and allows the readers to navigate the story without distraction.
TLDR: The story feels more like a how-to guide to speedrunning Dragonball with a Kryptonian.
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