Cute little story so far. Reminds me of the style of Pokemon or early Naruto.
The story is pretty straightforward. MC is a kid heading off to magic school, and the first few chapters are spent meeting him, his family, and the various kids who will be his posse/rivals at school, as well the love interests.
The writing isn't bad, but there are some issues with grammar, the tense swaps from past to present regularly, and there are some typos and missing punctuation marks. The story could do with a little editing for this reason.
Otherwise, a typical magic school adventure so far.
Cute little story so far. Reminds me of the style of Pokemon or early Naruto.
The story is pretty straightforward. MC is a kid heading off to magic school, and the first few chapters are spent meeting him, his family, and the various kids who will be his posse/rivals at school, as well the love interests.
The writing isn't bad, but there are some issues with grammar, the tense swaps from past to present regularly, and there are some typos and missing punctuation marks. The story could do with a little editing for this reason.
Otherwise, a typical magic school adventure so far.
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