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33. Team 7 VS Team 2May 3, 2024
32. Capture the FlagApr 23, 2024
31. Dinner GatheringApr 13, 2024
30. Potion Brewing pt.3Apr 1, 2024
29. Potion Brewing pt.2Apr 1, 2024
28. Potion-BrewingMar 17, 2024
27. Roommates/PurposeMar 6, 2024
26. AlumniMar 6, 2024
25. XPFeb 28, 2024
24. Phantom NestFeb 20, 2024
23. Trouble on DeckFeb 13, 2024
22. Moonlight VowFeb 7, 2024
21. Spring KataFeb 5, 2024
20. Club/TempestFeb 4, 2024
19. The AssemblyFeb 2, 2024

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Shyuurin

Status: 5. belthon city/academy island

Jan 18, 2024

Cute little story so far. Reminds me of the style of Pokemon or early Naruto.

The story is pretty straightforward. MC is a kid heading off to magic school, and the first few chapters are spent meeting him, his family, and the various kids who will be his posse/rivals at school, as well the love interests.

The writing isn't bad, but there are some issues with grammar, the tense swaps from past to present regularly, and there are some typos and missing punctuation marks. The story could do with a little editing for this reason.

Otherwise, a typical magic school adventure so far.

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