Betrayed by his most trusted soldier captain jack was killed, but when he thought it was all over he meet the soul of a man named Alex Eswald.
Alex said to him "I will allow your soul to reincarnate in my body but on two conditions, you need to fulfill these conditions if not you will perish"
"What are your conditions ?"
"First you need to kill the bastard who betrayed me and get revenge for me"
"Understandably, what is the second condition"
"the second condition...you n-need to...to"
"out with it"
"you need to fuck..."
"huh"
"them all"
"huh ?"
"The second condition is that you need to fuck all those around me, but not just them, you need to fuck all the powerful women"
"How am I supposed to do that ?"
"Don't worry I will give you a gift that will help you in your journey, so do you accept and promise to fulfill those conditions ?"
"I promise"
follow jack as he becomes Alex through his journey to fuck all powerful women of his new world, it's not like he wanted it to happen, obviously, but you know, he had to since he promised.
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Hello everyone, before we begin, I'd like to clarify that English is not my first language, and this is my first novel, so there may be mistakes (but I'm working on improving). Additionally, the early chapters are short, but as I became more accustomed to writing, the number of words per chapter increased, so you don't need to worry about all chapters being short.
I primarily publish on the Webnovel site (application), so there might be a difference of one or two chapters between the two sites.
I believe that's all, happy reading!
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- Chapter 316 : NothingDec 7, 2024
- Chapter 315 : Ride back homeDec 4, 2024
- Chapter 314 : First kiss (2)Dec 2, 2024
- Chapter 313 : First kiss (1)Nov 29, 2024
- Chapter 312 : He handed him his assNov 29, 2024
- Chapter 311 : The play (3)Nov 25, 2024
- Chapter 310 : The play (2)Nov 22, 2024
- Chapter 309 : The play (1)Nov 20, 2024
- Chapter 308 : Wedding storyNov 18, 2024
- Chapter 307 : ReunitedNov 16, 2024
- Chapter 306 : Touch of desireNov 14, 2024
- Chapter 305 : Lust energyNov 14, 2024
- Chapter 304 : Unexpected encounter (2)Nov 9, 2024
- Chapter 303 : Unexpected encounter (1)Nov 7, 2024
- Chapter 302 : Screwed upNov 7, 2024
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All Rights Reserved- Ongoing - Updated Dec 7, 2024
- 1951 reading
- 379 plan to read
- 43 completed
- 69 paused
- 129 dropped
If you are looking for a story which have a story and erotic then read it.
The chapters word count is around 850-900. In the starting story might feel rushed and long s*x chapters but after that it just became perfect for me.
It is recommended.
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Great novel, definitely rough in the first few chapters but very quickly improves and pacings great for the most part. Balance between action and smut is great with both happening at correct moments (plotwise) with this not devolving into just a pure smut novel (like many similar novels do).
Two problems I have with this are info dump and the character's interactions. Info dump specially with how locations are spoken of with the author giving all the details pertaining to it in a narration. In my opinion it would be better to let it flow naturally through character dialogue and leaving some info about it ambiguous until it makes sense for a character to reveal it. On the other hand with the characters it would be great to see more interactions with the rest of the daughters though it's understandable why it hasn't due to the plot but for future reference in case they happen to be pushed to the side.
This brings me into another point. So far no character has been forgotten or thrown away unnaturally with even the side characters making relevant appearances and are noted/speak in the scenes where they are present. After the few rough chapters characters and their dialogue feels natural in a sense which is a incredibly impressive thing from the author and is one of aspects of the novel that has got me hooked. One part that may be underrated is the world building. The organisations, countries etc have their own problems and motivations to deal with that are not focused on the MC also with them taking logical actions mostly. The smut in my opinion is decent but can be improved as of the latest chapter I'm at it feels ok but not the greatest (talking about the scenes themselves not anything that happens outside of that such as intimate actions between characters, those are perfect).
Honestly great job to the author.
This was a pretty rough review that I made and early on in the story from what I've read, many aspects of the story may change for better or worse so take this review as you will.
Also this may very well be biased as just before reading this I read another novel that put me in a terrible mood with the first chapter which I gave the most half-assed review of my life so again take that as you will. So good luck to the author and I'll be sticking along for the ride
(btw I hope you can actually make sense of what I wrote I just jotted down my thoughts abd didn't structure it well) ~mabel ✨️
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I've enjoyed the story so far. No big complaints over the story itself, it's well written other than a few missed typos or the occasional unneeded extra word here and there. The character developments are all fun to follow. If I do have anything I'd want to see is more of Jack's personality since it doesn't feel like that has been brought out much. Not sure if that's intentional or not, it's just something I'd like to read in this story a bit more.
This being a first novel and English not being a native language...I'd say you're doing fantastic!
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I need more chaptersssss..... This novel gives me Conquerors Path vibes. I mean this is enjoyable and fun. Has a smart MC and likeable characters. Its hard to find novels like this and I hope the author continues to add complexity and develop this. Definitely has the potential to be one of the best novels on here
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