I'm writing this just to counterbalance the guy with the 2 star rating. He pulled most of his complaints out of his a**. It's most definetly NOT perfect but it's good. In my opinion better than the Minato one from the same author. 

Give this one a go and judge for yourself.

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This is horrible and that also feels like a gentle word to describe how this story has started. First of all I am following other fanfics by same author and have rated all others as 5 stars so I am not trying to be intentionally biased. 

The first chapter starts with some chaotic action which is written so badly that it is difficult to understand which character is doing what exactly in different scenes. MC is growing up to be mysterious or so the author wanted to show but nope. MC somehow with the mind of an adult is intentionally quite literally pretending to have a sob story and making himself an outcast for no reason. The setup and writing is so bad that I cannot understand the drop in quality from one of the best authors I follow. The background of the MC is absolutely inconsistent and not explained well. And ofcourse I dislike the fact that MC is the only one so far completely responsible for trying to make himself miserable and then acting like he is making smart choices. 

At this time I definitely do not recommend this story to anyone. Please check out other stories by this author instead they are much more amazing. 

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