In an AU, Naruto doesn't have his fate sealed as a Jinchuuriki of the nine-tails fox; instead, his sisters receive the halves of the Bijuu, and something else emerges in him. He receives powers and memories from another world, a world where there were pirates, sailors, organizations trying to dominate or maintain their power at sea. Naruto ends up being born without any chakra, as the only being in the world without this energy, however, he received something else in return.
Naruto has the Pika Pika no Mi.
Minato and Kushina are alive.
This is horrible and that also feels like a gentle word to describe how this story has started. First of all I am following other fanfics by same author and have rated all others as 5 stars so I am not trying to be intentionally biased.
The first chapter starts with some chaotic action which is written so badly that it is difficult to understand which character is doing what exactly in different scenes. MC is growing up to be mysterious or so the author wanted to show but nope. MC somehow with the mind of an adult is intentionally quite literally pretending to have a sob story and making himself an outcast for no reason. The setup and writing is so bad that I cannot understand the drop in quality from one of the best authors I follow. The background of the MC is absolutely inconsistent and not explained well. And ofcourse I dislike the fact that MC is the only one so far completely responsible for trying to make himself miserable and then acting like he is making smart choices.
At this time I definitely do not recommend this story to anyone. Please check out other stories by this author instead they are much more amazing.
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writing is okay, lead characters has decent depth, although only if they're involved in the events, aside from that, they're basically cardboard with nametag, gender, and affiliations attached to them.
oh, and whether they hate MC, don't care, or love him, that's it
MC said to have a complete set of memory of an Adult with a lot of experience, blood and grease in his hands, but acted like an edgy teenager, his actions are also inconsistent, all just for the "dramatic" plot convenience.
Also he weirdly only adamantly hide his powers from his family, for "safety" reasons,
he literally trusted strangers more than his family
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I'm writing this just to counterbalance the guy with the 2 star rating. He pulled most of his complaints out of his a**. It's most definetly NOT perfect but it's good. In my opinion better than the Minato one from the same author.
Give this one a go and judge for yourself.
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No idea why this novel has a low rating. Story is good, characters are great, plot is being swirled in a positive direction. I say let the author cook since right now things are still raw and soo much potential can be unleashed in this novel. This is my take on it and I hope other people can see what I can see.
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Not sure what the low ratings are for but the story is good. &Nbsp;No real issues and it seems to be getting better. &Nbsp;It’s an AU so there are some big changes and it’s soo much better than your typical FF
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