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The 2nd Chance
The 2nd Chance
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A man is at the end of his life. You could say that its no one's fault but his own. You could say it's fate. He would say its both. If there is anything he could have it would be the chance to fix the fate of those close to him. Fate has its own plans. He finds himself in a situation where he struggles to even believe it's even real. Is It real?

This is my first attempt at writing so please be patient with me. The cover photo is not mine. I will add tags as they become relevant. I'm half just winging with story. Its possible inconsistencies in the story may arise since it's not all written out. Thank you for reading.

I appreciate any and all feed back. I'm also curious as to why the 1 star rating's I wish you would say why :/ but I know the story wont be everyone's favorite cup of tea.

Oh, and one more thing. If you are looking for a story that is all sunshine and rainbows you've come to the wrong place.

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AdultAdventureGender BenderGirls LoveRomanceTragedy
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Absent Parents Beastkin Child Protagonist Doting Older Siblings Female Protagonist Loli Male to Female Multiple POV Nudity Overprotective Siblings Past Trauma R-18 Racism Rape Reincarnated into a Game World Royalty Sister Complex Slave Protagonist Strong Love Interests Weak to Strong
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      New Kawaii1234567
      Status: chapter 10 “training begins”
      May 28, 2020

      TLDR: It's not very good slavery / torture porn. My guess even if you're into that it's at best a 4 if not it's a negative number 

      Writing : 3/5  The words are correct and the flow is OK, but there's no charm or hook. Flat is the adjective that comes to mind

      Plot: 1/5  REPEAT:  MC does something stupid without thinking about it and bad things happen to him ; UNTIL (DONE READING) ; There's your plot

      Characters: 2/5 The MC is pathetic and whiny, the rest are generic. I Was surprised, there wasn't one of the villains twisting their waxed mustache while foreclosing on orphanage run by nuns who had taken a vow of Poverty

      World Building: 2/5 Well it's got magical slavery. It's something of an immersion breaker for me. I just don't see how that manages to have any kind of functional society

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