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Cute story, for a time. Story flow and sentence structure / wording need to be refined to bring characters more to life, have plot develop in a more show not tell manner and remove inconsistencies of character and plot. I like the authors ideas and look forward to them developing their writing skill.
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The story has problems as do all stories like these stories, example as far as its shown humans are shown as pure incarnation of evil, completely igboring that our MC used to be human.
thus she should have perfect understanding that its the upperclass opressing Everyone not just beastmen, its just that if they did it for humans Who are majority they would face revolution, there is certain to be humans Who work with and cooperate with other beastmen or magical being.
MC also claims to be hoping for peaceful means but at first moment decided to have war against humans. Hypocritical and shallow, as stories like these always are, im all for hating religipn but when it comes to hating all humans Im going to leave a negative review
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I enjoyed the story so far, but the clifhanger hiatus is a little mean..
I will definitely continue reading if it comes back
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Im going around and reviewing stories cause it seems unfair not to do so
The story is quite GB focused on the beginning, it's standard GL with quite a lot of fluff, although still quite short hopefully won't stay that way
(I would give it 4.5 stars but I can't seem to change the rating at all)
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