I dont know why adrad555 finds it bland and the characters hollow and the s*x scenes not exciting and arousing (he's probably reading it wrong), anyways i've read worse but still see the better bits and I can confidently say this is way better and just a LITTLE below the great ones,

The characters feel alive, tho the way the author coveys their emotions is a little lacking its still great, the figthing scenes are EPIC to say the least its unique and not just hit and run and win, and the s*x scenes are short on the early chaps but it get better, AND ITS NOT HAREM, YAY.?

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Chash

Status: chapter: 48

Sep 22, 2021

Well basically I like the mix between fights and cough cough incest cough cough hahahahaha

I like it

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adrad555

Status: chapter: 63

Oct 27, 2021

Well this story is nothing special the characters are hollow (MC included) they do not grow or think about there actions, or how it can effect them they just go along with it becoming NPC instead of being alive. The sad thing is that they had a lot of chances to just talk and think things out, but they are all ignored. The s*x scenes are bland, short and not all that arousing (everybody has there own tastes, I guess. To me they don't seem that appealing). What draws you to this story is the premise of incest but that is not enough to keep you, that is where the villain comes in which does the job well by them being really loathsome. There is nothing in this story that really stands out over the masses of other stories.

It is good enough of a read just do not expect for it to really draw you in or excite you, and do not expect all that much depth.

Edit: The author went the emotional incest rout instead of the horny incest rout so I am reducing my rating to 2 stars and I am going to stop reading (I am just not into real incest and this story makes it feel real instead of horny)

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