HUH?! What's this? AN actual quality fanfic? Side characters in the canon finally getting the limelight instead of the usual cardboard hAREM lemon treatment? 

*squints at author*.. Oi you. You're gonna finish this masterpiece right? *Pumps sawed off shotgun* RIGHT?

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I love it. Simply splendid. This is a great My Hero Academia fanfiction, and I look forward to more in the future. 

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Great MHA fanfic, has that law and order vide a mix of Deadpool. You can definitely relax will reading this fanfic.

Since this story is a early publish I'm not going to comment on Grammer because that can be edited later.

The 'flow' of the story was so-so in the start but got better and better later on.

The main character is well designed, although some of the interactions could be considered robotic, I think that he is cool.

Yes, so my review is gonna be a 5, I would like to thank Gonshido for publishing this on SH and really really really hope it goes far. :)

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Strangely good. That’s all I can really say

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Totally recommend this🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭👍

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I absolutely recomend it, I think this novel is amazing, I was not expecting that. 

I saw the poorly photoshopped cover, I saw the words "GTA San Andreas System" and my first thought was "OH, this is going to be a really funny TRAINWRECK of a novel, isn't it?" But no, its actually really well writen if a bit zanny at times, sometimes it takes really weird directions but there's no hesitation at all and its all played straight in a way. All the characters have their own motivations and lives outside the MC and are just perfectly in character with their manga personalities.

The reason im giving it only 4 stars its becouse of the second to last arc (from current date chapters) was really bad, not becouse I have a problem that series in particulary was extra goofy or something but becouse it was mostly left unchanged the whole way without much involment of the old characters, which is boring, except for maybe the antagonist, he had some changes and he was really well writen and probably the best part of that arc, then at the end when spoilers

It got better after that arc and so far there's some new intrigue going on, seems cool, the only other problem is that during and after that last arc I felt the novel was a bit aimless, its not the end of the world tho, i'll keep reading.

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From the early chapter I already see the inexperience, let's list them :

-too focused on training montage rather than the plot (MC relationship with Fuyumi in early chapter)

-we don't care what you are doing with your muscle, why not explore your system or write more about world building

-the plot is too fast / forced and the reasoning behind them is dumb af (Muscular almost die by kitchen Knife, can you imagine?)

-MC is boring, we don't need another Deku. Makes something interesting for fck sake.

-MC feel guilty coz his GF stopping him doing hero while being quirkless, I bet watching Crime News is a torture for him.

-too much technical bullsht & plothole (watching TV 2x speed = perception training, yes another training montage with 0 logic)

-even when canon starts kick in he basically just tag-along (Jesus, do something usefull !!!)

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Grammar is choppy, but the plot, dialogue, humor, and other aspects are very good. Enjoyable reading :D

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I love how this fanfic doesn't butcher its original and creates a fun separate but familiar story line.

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