Well the story had a good premise, but at this point the MC is not the main character anymore and is more like a part of the background, he is barely active in most chapters. The story abandoned the premise of a shop being relevant and konoha is just the first stop of the story it seems and he barely cares about happens there at this point...

It would makes more sense if the title was about teaching magic around the multiverse and changing the plot in a way the MC's want wherever he goes.

The MC is just wish fullfilling without any effort because he got too much plot armor too easy and too soon, he is a spectator in his own story and the narrative doesn't makes it pleasant to be a spectator with him, he got less and less 'screen time' as the story progress...

Bad system (barely relevant), bad store (Just plot protection at the start), bland MC, too many good side characters don't make a story and most are Just chilling until they are needed to ease the plot.

P.s: nothing against the author or his work, he write well, no major grammar mistakes or anything, is just a wish fullfillment story without real danger happening. If you like this and just want to pass time, go ahead.

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Must read for old school naruto lovers. I just love the interactions the MC has with the community and I cant wait to see what will happen next.

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As I have read this I'm fine with it

The first few chapters are good

But when characters from another world are introduced my problems with this fic began

It feels that the system is just a person with a wish fulfilling power and the world is their toy and their MC is also a toy

Since this fic is not a lot so I will not insult this work of others

Tbh it feels this is a typical Chinese story, Wich I don't mind but good Chinese stories are hard to find and translators are harder to find

Though I know that the author is not a Chinese but the fic gives that vibe

But there is no things like those annoying Chinese propaganda which is a plus in my book

I will update this review as I continue the story

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This is unexpectedly good one to read in between waiting for your favorite ones.

Sometimes a bit forced and cringed, but I would interact In similar facion with events and characters of Naruto world.

I think it is a bit too fast paced with stated timelines, but that is just my preferences.

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I didn't get far before I could tell author doesn't really put any thought into story at all. 

This is pretty much as if it's written for sh*ts and giggles. 

If they even write it themselves. Which I'm not sure of. Because I remember something very similar on MTL website. Still, it might have been smarter if that was the case.

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